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Chuck vs The Prequel
« on: January 11, 2009, 05:33:08 PM »
Chuck vs The Prequel is my second attempt at writing a Chuck story.

It begins approximately a week before the pilot episode in September 2007.

The concept in mind is to rewind a short bit and address some of the unanswered questions I had from the first few episodes of season 1 that aren't likely going to be revisted by the show.  Given the time frame, it also serves to set up some of the story to Chuck vs the Plan B.

The pace is meant to somewhat match the show.  The length is shorter and grouped by day so that it could appear as a collection of webisodes.

My intent is to keep everyone in character either as they are in the pilot, or as needed, how they would have behaved just right before the events of the pilot episode.

I'll try to get new ones up every few days as possible.

PS: Unlike my first try, this one actually includes dialogue this time.  ;)  I also attempted to follow what seems like established Chuck protocol by embedding various TV/movie/game/music references where it made sense.
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Re: Chuck vs The Prequel
« Reply #1 on: January 11, 2009, 05:35:04 PM »
Sunday, 16th
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"STAY IN THE VAN!", came the stern order from the front seat.

Before he could say anything in his defence, his handler closed the sliding divider thereby isolating him in the back of the van.

These were four words he had never heard until getting involved with them.  Nevertheless, as much as it went against his nature, maybe this time it was for the best.  After all, he didn't really know what would be happening on this mission.

Hopefully something would be happening soon.  His watch and his phone had been taken away from him, and unlike the usual mission van, this one had a completely empty cargo area.  He guessed they must not have wanted him to play with anything while he waited.  It began to drive him crazy that there weren't even any windows he could peek out of.

The sliding divider abruptly slid open.  The Fulcrum agent's face glared derisively at him.

"Okay Bryce, we're going on a little field trip", he jeered before once again sliding the door closed.

The travelling for this 'field trip' felt like it took an eternity.  Without his watch or phone, Bryce struggled not knowing where he was or even how long they might be driving.

When the van finally stopped, Tommy reopened the divider and motioned for him to come look through the front window.

"Take a look Bryce.  You're making an unannounced pick up in that building later tonight."

Bryce tried to focus his eyes on the building the best he could from where he sat.  It wasn't one he recognized, and by all appearances didn't stand out as anything that held any significance.

"Fulcrum wants something in there, and you'll be stealing it for us."

Bryce's attention automatically shifted to the building's perimeter and the surrounding area for possible entry and escape routes.

"You'll need this to download the data from the computer you'll be 'visiting'."

Bryce looked at the strange multicolor wire attachment he had been given.

"When am I 'visiting' this computer?" he replied.

"Later tonight, when it will be quiet.  Until then you'll be enjoying the rest of the day with us - tell your girlfriend you won't be home until later."

Tommy nodded to the driver and the van began moving.  Before sliding the divider closed he issued one last warning, "This is important Bryce, don't screw it up."

   ---------------

Her partner had just screwed things up again.  If he had just listened to her, she wouldn't be sprinting like this.  Her strength had always been her endurance, not her speed.  It was her strength that now kept her within sight of her target - a target she was currently pursuing in Los Angeles.
 
Charlene tried to catch her breath.  It had been a long time since she had played soccer or had done this much running. 

"Stop!" she managed to yell as she drew her gun.

The wanted man stopped in his tracks, seemingly needing the opportunity to catch his breath as well.  He signalled his surrender.

"Finally," she muttered.  After more than three months of his narrow escapes, he finally decided to stop running from her.

"At least someone here has some sense," she would have declared to her partner.  Her partner however was nowhere to be found.

Agent Tully leisurely jogged up next to her and raised his gun as well.  "I love it when a plan comes together!" he said awkwardly grinning.

It was too hard for her to hear.  A week of his mistakes and he apparently considered himself the next Hannibal Smith?  Charlene wouldn't give him the satisfaction of hearing any such compliment from her.

She briefly considered shooting him instead.

"Call it in, and make sure they bring the hazmat equipment." she ordered.

Within minutes the disguised CIA transport pulled up.  A tall agent dressed in a parcel delivery uniform collected the man she had captured.  The stolen case labelled "w.flonium-42" was carefully placed into the secure storage unit. 

"All clear!" he said, indicating that there had been no detectable leaks.  He closed the doors and drove off.

She put her gun away and exhaled loudly.

Agent Tully spoke up.  "Hey, uh, the next time you're in the States or I mean L.A., give me a call okay?  I can help you on another mission - it'll be fun!".

"I'll keep it in mind," Charlene said with a fake smile, "Goodbye Louis." 

She took pride in her craft, and this was another job well done.  In some ways the sense of accomplishment was bigger on this mission.  It had been more difficult, and had a lot more riding on its success.

Charlene allowed herself to continue enjoying her hard earned victory.

'Work hard, play hard' was the kind of motto she believed in.  She had held up the first half of that deal, now she felt justified in rewarding herself for her efforts.  She would make the most of the days before she received the inevitable next assignment. 

Charlene looked up at the early evening sky.  The Los Angeles climate seemed hotter and much brighter than the places her missions took place in.  Compared to the locals, her pale complexion had been garnering far more looks than she had been comfortable with.  She swept her reddish-brown hair out of her face.  Perhaps it was her hairstyle, or during the mission - the lack thereof, that had played a part in that attention.  Doing something about that would be her new mission #1.

She was feeling better already.

   ---------------

CIA Director Graham was not feeling well. 

This evening he stood in front of a strategically important project; one that had just malfunctioned.  The Intersect was just starting to produce results, but it was far too early and certainly far too costly at its current stage to be able to declare it an official success. 

Looking down at the display, he saw the cartoonish outline of a computer with crossed out eyes.  He cringed at the thought of having to justify adding an additional 2.5 million dollars to the budget.

"How long will it take to get this back online?" he growled to the technician.

The technician referred to his tablet.  "The inventory shows one should be available again in about a week."

"That is one expensive keyboard", he growled once again.

"Replace the part and fix the system.  Keep me updated on its status."

   ---------------

Bryce had 'enjoyed' spending the day imprisoned by Fulcrum.  He hadn't been able to see any of the other Fulcrum agents apart from Tommy. 

He knew that Sarah wouldn't be able to answer her phone.  When it had been time, he left her an innocent sounding voicemail.  Tommy certainly had the type of training to realize if Bryce had tried to provide her with any clues to his situation. 

It didn't matter, Bryce couldn't think of any shared history that he could use to tip her off. 

Perhaps it was better for her not to know.  He had always been able to handle situations himself, with possibly having to endure waiting like this being the only exception to that rule.

Eventually Tommy returned with the bag.  He put it back over Bryce's head and led him into a vehicle.

Once they began moving, Tommy removed the bag.  The two of them sat in the back of a darkened ambulance.  The rear windows were frosted so that no one could see in, or he figured, so that he couldn't see out.

The mission appeared like it would begin in earnest when they arrived outside the same nondescript building they had been at before.

Bryce sat in the dark for what felt like 15 minutes without a word from Tommy.  He wondered what they were waiting on.

Tommy's phone was the only source of light as it dimly illuminated his face.

"When do I get to know anything else about what I'm looking for?" Bryce asked sarcastically.

"Not tonight", he said putting his phone away.  "Something's come up."

Bryce observed the change in his Fulcrum handler's demeanor.  Watching Tommy indicate to the driver that tonight's mission had been called off, he knew he had been given a seriously needed window of opportunity.

He couldn't let this opportunity pass him by, he would use the time he now had to discover Fulcrum's objective and complete his mission.
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Re: Chuck vs The Prequel
« Reply #2 on: January 11, 2009, 05:38:30 PM »
Monday, 17th
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Bryce walked in to the CIA building as if it were just a typical Monday. This was not however a typical Monday.

A concerned voice to his right yelled, "Bryce!?! What the hell happened yesterday? Is everything ok?" 

He stopped and turned slightly to face Sarah. She stood outside the control center door.

"Yeah, it's.  complicated", he shrugged and continued on his path. 

This morning his path led him directly to his boss's office.  The tone that Director Graham used when he had said that he needed to speak to him in person meant his wait would be short, and that the topic was urgent.

"Have you been able to gain any additional information about this rogue group?"

"Not much sir.  Fulcrum is going to have me steal computer data from some kind of commercial looking facility.  My new handler won't provide me with too many details.  He won't brief me any further until the last possible minute."

"Agent Larkin, do you have any idea what kind of data they're interested in, or where they plan to steal it from?"

"No sir, I don't.  The Fulcrum agents took my cell and knew about the GPS in my watch.  I didn't recognize the area.  All I know about the computer is that I will need to use this."

Bryce carefully removed the attachment from his pocket.  The reaction that came from Graham provided Bryce with the gravity of the situation.

"There are less than a dozen various types of computer systems where that would be useful.  For them to extract data from any of these would be absolutely detrimental to United States' Intelligence."

Graham paused to consider his options.  "Don't let anyone else see that attachment.  I want you to continue on; prevent the data from falling into Fulcrum's hands at all costs."

"Sir, the group leader, Tommy, doesn't trust me yet.  He will have another team watching my every move.  If the situation deteriorates, I may need to send it through an intermediate courier."

Graham's tone took a serious turn.  "What did you have in mind?"

"I have a contact outside the CIA that I can trust.  He's a civilian and he won't be part of Fulcrum.  I can count on him to hold the data until I pick it up."

The Director didn't like what he was hearing.  He gave himself a few moments to come up with a counter-argument.  Those moments came and went without his objection.

"Okay," he said reluctantly, "but I want intel on this civilian first."

Bryce nodded in agreement before leaving.

"A civilian. " Graham shook his head. 

If things went bad, there would be too many eggs in an untrained basket that he knew nothing about.

He needed a real 'Plan B'. One with qualified CIA agents he could trust.

The Director turned his chair and began looking for available personnel.

 ---------------

Charlene took a deep breath and exhaled slowly. It felt good to have a break.

She wondered how long she would have for her holiday. That last mission was the longest one she had been assigned to. Over three months it had taken her across Europe and eventually to the US. 

Her time on the beach today had so far been every bit as therapeutic as she had hoped. There was something peaceful about the sound of the waves and the gentle breeze that came with them. She wished for at least a few weeks like this. 

That seemed fair: a few weeks of fun and sun on the beach before going back to her usual type of missions. Since she had been given her gun and became a full agent, her missions were still computer related but they now took place out in the field. Sneak in, gain access to whatever system was necessary, do what was required, and get out. 

If the research lab had just reported the theft instead of covering it up, she wouldn't have had to break in and get the surveillance footage. What had the lab managers been hoping for? Stealing a chemical compound like that had been a major security breach. With that thief now in custody, she wondered if she would be getting another promotion. 

Charlene began dreaming about her future missions before stopping herself. She smiled.

Here and now her most important mission was to get a tan. Enough of a tan to avoid sticking out in LA, but not enough to stick out wherever her next assignment might take her. Maybe just enough of a tan to make friends jealous - if she had ever found the time to have any friends to make jealous.

Charlene began to notice that her rookie experience in the sun had an unintended effect - she had become a bit parched. She wondered what an appropriate drink would be to enjoy in an environment like this. Perhaps something with mango, or better yet pineapple?

Her phone rang. She paused for a moment as she glanced at the number. Charlene turned to look at the waves again. She estimated that she was likely within throwing distance. She sighed softly and decided she needed to take the call anyway.

"Yes sir?" was all her thirsty and disappointed voice could convey.

Director Graham cut to the chase, "We have an immediate matter of national security. I'm assigning you a new mission as of this moment. Since there isn't sufficient time, you will need to maintain your current cover identity. Your assignment will require going undercover at an electronics store; they will be expecting you later today. You will be holding there for an information exchange, possibly involving unaware civilians. It is imperative that you blend into the background and not draw attention to yourself or the exchange. Further mission briefing information and additional documents are being sent to your hotel room. Is this clear?"

"Yes sir. Will this mission be requiring a partner or team?"

"No. This is to be a short term solo mission. A simple information exchange. Get the information, keep it in our hands, and move on - no team or partner required."

"Understood sir," she said before the call ended.

Charlene felt her smile reappear across her face. Short term assignments were usually simple enough, there wouldn't be any mistake-prone partners to complicate things, and there should be plenty of free time for her to return here to work on that tan after all.

 ---------------

Charlene stood outside of a large electronics store. It was nothing like her relaxing beach. In large yellow lettering were the words 'Buy More'. The dossier left at her hotel room had provided little information on this environment. She felt her background as a hacker naturally would have led her to be a Nerd Herd employee, but she understood that as a sales associate she would be able to remain inside the store for the exchange. 

The first challenge to sell her cover would be knowing what she might be selling. The time she had spent on missions meant she was out of touch when it came to consumer electronics, video games, or what was hot and what wasn't. She attempted to compensate for her lack of preparedness by searching the web. Thanks to Google and YouTube she at least now knew how to demonstrate the use of a Wii, and how to play Guitar Hero. She hoped that it would be enough for a good first impression.

Looking around on this late Monday evening, the store seemed rather vacant. The employees that were present mostly reclined watching TV, were playing video games, or were wandering aimlessly as the few available customers remained largely ignored. The most animated sales associate was strapped into a racing seat of some sort, with a firm grasp on the steering wheel in front of him. From where she was standing the sounds coming from the seat's speakers were drowning out the taunts she guessed he was giving his on-screen opponents. Beyond him she noticed the closest thing resembling an office that she had seen so far.

As Charlene entered, she spied a large man looking down at his desk, nearly in tears.

"Last bite of danish for the day" he said shaking his head before ceremoniously eating the remainder of his precious treat. The placard on his desk read "Big Mike". She respectfully waited before she knocked on the door frame.

Big Mike awoke from his trance. "You Charlene?" he asked looking up at her. 

As she nodded, he began ruffling through a stack of papers, before pulling out a folder.

Opening it up, he read over her fabricated transfer papers.

"St--- Str--- Strz---" Big Mike was stammering, trying to pronounce her last name.

"Strahovski. It's Polish", she said in her best American accent.

Big Mike continued to look flustered. If he had this much trouble over her cover name, he would certainly butcher her real name. She wondered if this was the kind of thing that people here were sued over. 

"Charlene is okay", she assured him with a comforting smile.

Her new boss sighed heavily and looked relieved.

"Charlene, you come highly recommended from the Echo Park Buy More. You sure you want this job?"

She nodded, trying to get a peek at what her cover achievements had been.

He motioned to her to follow as he got up and walked out into the store. "Okay. Let me give you a piece of advice to make it bearable - do what I do - keep as far away from these jokers as you can!"

Her eyes widened. Big Mike's reaction caused a moment of worry to settle in. She wondered how much, if anything, was missing from her dossier.

"Grimes!" he yelled abruptly, causing Charlene to jump.

The short bearded employee playing the racing game tried to get up. The seat he was strapped into yanked him back down. 

"Ooh, that's gonna leave a mark," he muttered unlocking his seatbelt.

"NEW BUY MORE TRANSFER EMPLOYEE - GIVE HER THE TOUR" Big Mike shouted while pointing at Charlene.

The employee stood and saluted: "Yes sir! Aye sir! Right away sir". With that, Big Mike returned to his office.

"Hi. Welcome to the Buy More. I'm Morgan by the way."

"Charlene," she replied.

"Okay, well Charlene, uh, it looks like you're here to sell some Buy More merchandise."

Morgan looked at his watch before beginning his stationary tour, "Video games are over there.  DVDs and music there.  the returns desk or 'The Hole' as I like to call it - which you want to avoid by the way - is over there.  TVs are on the wall, aaaaaaaannnnnnndddddd the break room is down the hall that way."

"Sorry for the short version," he continued while taking a few steps towards the front exit, "but I only have a few more minutes to go on my shift before I go to my best friend Chuck's tonight, so. "

Morgan stopped himself before resuming with an apologetic tone, "It's no big deal; all the isles are marked and you just have to pretend like you're working while actually avoiding any real work. Anyhoo, welcome to the Buy More!"

Even after this 'tour', she still didn't feel like she knew what to expect from this place. If the other employees here functioned with Morgan's kind of work ethic, it would be more challenging for her to blend in. Charlene had always considered herself to be a workaholic. The only time she wasn't was when her 'work' was to enjoy her time off.

She hoped this assignment would be as brief as Graham had implied. It was hard to imagine that she would have to spend entire days trying to appear to the rest as if she wasn't working. "Must not stand out," she attempted to remind herself. 

In the process of accepting her new assignment, she had completely forgotten about that drink she had been planning on enjoying. Her dry throat demanded that she settle for something less desirable.

On her way to the break room, the first thing she noticed were the many corporate 'inspirational' posters hanging everywhere. With amusing concepts like 'Buy More dollars', she seriously doubted that any of their attempts to program their employees could possibly have any effect. 

Charlene struck that last thought - in the corner of the break room was a lone employee who by all appearances might be susceptible. He was dressed in Nerd Herd attire and looked different than his coworkers. He sat emotionless playing a 'vintage' handheld video game that could have very well been straight from the 1980's. Neither her presence in the room nor her hand waving seemed to have any effect on him. She began to realize just how unusual this place could be.

The large vending machine labelled "Cold Drinks" beckoned. Putting the money into the machine, she pushed the button for some lemon flavored iced tea. Nothing happened. 

She pushed the iced tea button again. Still nothing.

The vending machine was clearly plugged in and turned on, but being stubborn. None of the other drink selections nor the money return button were functioning either. 

"It's a Nutrimatic machine," a dull voice from behind her informed.

Charlene spun around. From here she could better read his Nerd Herd name tag: Jeff. Jeff's eyes remained fixed on his game.

"You don't want it anyway," he deadpanned, "it doesn't taste entirely like tea. And their complaints division never returns my calls."

"Thanks!" She felt her friendly smile was being largely ignored.

Charlene attempted to speculate the type of training Jeff would have gone through to gain that level of peripheral awareness. Surely he hadn't been an agent at some point?

An even more terrifying realization interrupted her train of thought: after 15 minutes of what she had just witnessed at this store, who or what would she encounter tomorrow during her first full day?

Perhaps she would need something stronger than just lemon flavored iced tea.
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Re: Chuck vs The Prequel
« Reply #3 on: January 11, 2009, 05:58:13 PM »
But . . .  But . . . But - Jeff doesn't have a brain the size of a planet, surely?

What an interesting premise - I'm trying to work out what you are going to need Charlene for (or is she just Neighbourly - but that would be Melbourne rather than Sydney . . . ).

I look forward to reading more! Thank you.

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Re: Chuck vs The Prequel
« Reply #4 on: January 11, 2009, 06:21:34 PM »
Whi is Charlene there is no Chrlene as a major character on Chuck. ??????

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Re: Chuck vs The Prequel
« Reply #5 on: January 12, 2009, 10:15:09 AM »
But . . .  But . . . But - Jeff doesn't have a brain the size of a planet, surely?

I look forward to reading more! Thank you.

:)  Perhaps he needed to transfer that knowledge somewhere safer?  That means Morgan's beard does hold many secrets.

Glad you like it, the next day should be ready tomorrow.

Whi is Charlene there is no Chrlene as a major character on Chuck. ??????

Charlene is from my other attempt
to do a Chuck story posted here, Chuck vs the Plan B.
You're right there isn't a character by that name.  The character I had mind is one that hasn't been named officially on the show, but is often present (since the beginning) and conspicuously featured.  It's like the Ronaldo or 'Skip' Johnson characters.
I'd redo that story if I could, but the idea was to explain why she's often near Chuck, always stays in the background, and what she's thinking as she observes the Buy More while on assignment. 
I think she shows up at the very beginning along with Skip, maybe someone with the DVDs can confirm?

I would love to see Kylie guest on Chuck, but I think that her cover at the Buy More would be difficult. :)  I could imagine her being a good alternate pick for the upcoming Agent Forrest.
If nothing else it would be a good excuse to hear Yvonne's accent. . .

Charlene's on the far left.  Skip's on the far right.
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Re: Chuck vs The Prequel
« Reply #6 on: January 12, 2009, 10:56:17 AM »
Great story, I looking forward to read the next chapter. But I disappointed that isn't enough of Sarah in the chapters  ;D
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Re: Chuck vs The Prequel
« Reply #7 on: January 12, 2009, 11:43:36 AM »
Great story, I looking forward to read the next chapter. But I disappointed that isn't enough of Sarah in the chapters  ;D

Thanks!  No need to worry about Sarah. :)

When I was coming up with backstory material, she ended up with more than the other characters did.  A good portion of that should find its way into this story.
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Re: Chuck vs The Prequel
« Reply #8 on: January 13, 2009, 06:02:29 PM »
Tuesday, 18th
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"STAY IN THE VAN!"

She watched him back away from the door and sit back down.

Sarah calmed as she saw that she was being listened to.

She adjusted her headset a bit before continuing. "The Ink & Paint Club just changed their security rotation. You're close enough that they might get a visual on you. It won't be safe to proceed without first taking them into account."

Sarah looked at the feed from the external camera. "There isn't enough time to do that before we reach daylight. The operation for tonight will have to be postponed. Understood?"

"Affirmative Agent Walker"

Sarah watched her screen as the rookie agent climbed into the driver's seat and began driving away. She kept her eyes on the van's GPS until it indicated that it had left the mission area.

She looked at her watch and removed her headset. The morning shift was about to take over.

She rubbed her eyes for a moment. Over the last few weeks she had eventually grown accustomed to the effect that her temporary probation had inflicted on a nightly basis.

In almost a week she would be allowed to resume her regular duties with missions that didn't require her to oversee recent graduates.

Part of her desperately wanted to know what Bryce had said. Had it really been him that effectively got her 'benched', or had her feelings for him so obviously affected her abilities?

Sarah could feel the guilt getting the best of her.

Bryce had been held hostage at gunpoint on previous missions before, and she had always been able to kill his captor with a single shot. Why was it that this time she had missed? How could all of that training betray her and leave her to wound Bryce instead? She watched herself trying to take the shot again. It was almost embarrassing how he had to use the surprise of the moment to save himself.

Sarah felt bad about how that day had unfolded. At least it hadn't been a major wound, but the look on his face conveyed as much worry as it did his disappointment. 

It was a face she had difficulty keeping out of her mind, even now in an environment where her fellow mission controllers had traded their guns for headsets.

Sarah wished she could blame someone - someone must have overreacted, someone must have exaggerated the situation way out of context. She knew the only person she could really blame was herself.

She had taken the shot when she shouldn't have. That self-assured feeling she always had before she pulled the trigger had this time been clouded by her concern for Bryce. Now she wondered if she had wounded his feelings for her more than she had wounded him physically.

The 'counselor' she had been required to visit as part of her probation period had been of little help.

Dr. Beckett seemed interested in evaluating her behavior and her life before the CIA. He told her that he wanted to understand her situation from her perspective. Fortunately for her, life before Sarah Walker was off limits. The sessions had therefore been filled with vague suggestions and whimsical ideas that he directed towards his best guesses as to her former life.

She was glad that time spent going nowhere was coming to an end. After all, she wasn't Jenny or any of the other travelling aliases from her youth. Why hadn't her counselor been able to recognize that? Soon Sarah would get her chance to demonstrate who she was - an agent for the CIA. A successful agent that made a difference by going out on field missions.

As she left the control room, she stood alone in the empty hallway and wondered if she would get to be paired up with Bryce.

 ---------------

Sarah's apartment reflected her sense of style - clean, bright, functional, and just enough of a personal touch to keep it from being spartan.

Dr. Beckett had even wanted to talk about her apartment. He seemed persistent in knowing what it felt like to be home. His questions implied he thought it was healthy to display photos of loved ones, gifts from friends and family, or even souvenirs.

Sarah had tried to change the subject. Rather than admit her apartment's true state, she made it a point to stress the tactical significance of function following form. Besides, an agent never knew what surprises lurked around the corner. 

She didn't have any friends or family to put on display. Her friends and family were agents and the CIA. Putting their photos up would have put them at risk. The only pictures she allowed herself to keep were privately stored on her phone, under password protection.

The way that she had stumbled through her defense had been obvious to her counselor. He had continued with his suggestion that it would be an opportunity for her to establish a feeling of a natural home environment.

"Maybe later," she said softly, falling backwards onto the bed.

Looking up at the ceiling, she reheard Bryce yesterday telling her that 'it was complicated'. It was a phrase he often used when he didn't want to talk about something.

She wished she could read him, she wished she could see what was behind that mask. Mission after mission, she had been able to read and profile allies as well as enemies. What made him different?

Sarah sighed. After the incident she had hardly been able to see him. Sunday she was supposed to finally have her chance to reconnect with him, but he simply hadn't shown up. Making it worse was that he hadn't even given her an excuse for brushing her off.

Why couldn't he give her a reason for being distant? He admitted that he hadn't been given any missions yet. He simply chose to hide behind that impenetrable smile. 

Sarah wondered if all serious relationships were this difficult.

Why couldn't she just have an honest relationship where she didn't feel like she had to constantly guess how he felt about her? A relationship that didn't include those fake displays of emotion that they were trained to utilize.

Love wasn't part of a mission.

Honest relationships were something that normal everyday people could have - people not her. Sarah told herself to quit daydreaming before it ruined her mood.

After all, she thought with a smile, she needed her full concentration for a much bigger mission - to get up off of the bed, take a shower, and get some sleep.

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Sarah felt the shower wash away a full night's worth of sitting at a station. It was refreshing and invigorating, normally a good thing, except that now she couldn't fall asleep.

She glanced over at her clock radio. It indicated that it was nearly 9am. 

She wondered when her drowsiness would return.

Sarah continued staring at her clock radio before eventually chuckling. Her counselor had suggested that she listen to music, thinking that it might be therapeutic for her.

It was the only suggestion Sarah felt likely held any merit. After all, she used to listen to music.

Sarah reached over and turned the radio on. It only took her a few notes to recognize the melody. 

"Great," she said in disbelief. The station was midway though Cake's song "Short Skirt Long Jacket." Sarah shook her head slightly. Why was it that after all this time that she suddenly heard this song almost once a week? 

Before she had become Sarah Walker - CIA agent, Jenny Burton had developed a true love for music. All the time she spent listening to the radio in-between cons exposed her to the bands and the songs that were popular.

Eventually, she had even started identifying individual memories and places by the music that she had been listening to at that time. She guessed that if she had been able to make any friends during her childhood, she would have had at least something in common to talk about.

This song reminded her of the mission that had gotten her initially noticed by her superiors.

It was the mission that had changed the direction of her career. Until that point the name Sarah Walker felt like just another alias, and the early missions weren't so different from the cons she had grown up on. She was just Jenny with a gun, and Jenny held her habit of listening to music to fill the time.

This song had been one of her favorites then; she could remember playing it over and over. It was a wonder her CD player hadn't been worn out from that track alone. 

That mission had been a bit of a double edged sword. Afterwards, Sarah Walker received missions that were much more involved and no longer felt like the simpler cons from her youth. She no longer had the kind of time to herself that Jenny had been accustomed to.

At some point along the way, everything that had represented Jenny somehow faded away.

Sarah knew she had outgrown Jenny's needs. It was what Sarah Walker had achieved for herself after that transformation that had eventually led her to Bryce.

When she was with him, she didn't think about the things she had given up on - like music.

A newer song began to play. It was one she didn't recognize. The lyrics were fairly generic and stressed the difficulty of relationships. It wasn't the kind of music Sarah wanted to listen to right now. She changed the channel only to find yet another contemporary song she didn't recognize agonizing over someone not being there for her. 

How had her counselor imagined that this was supposed to help?

Sarah reached over and slapped the radio's power button. If this was the kind of message the radio provided her, she probably hadn't missed much over the years that she distanced herself from the music scene.

All these songs were doing were stirring up the personal angst from her past or pointing out the flaws in her present.

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Chuck sat at the Nerd Herd desk.

His iPod played his latest auditory experiment: 'Jill Angst Mix 2007'.

It wasn't having the desired cathartic effect. He thought that it might draw out all of the harsh feelings of being hurt and betrayed. In their place, there would be room to revisit the better memories he had together with Jill and the friendships he had while at Stanford.

This experiment was a disaster. The musical reminders were making him feel even worse about losing Jill, about leaving Stanford behind, and even about his present lackluster life at the Buy More. 

He stopped the player from doing further damage and slowly removed his earbuds.

A green blur flew up in front of him.

"Somebody today is a big deeeaaaalllll. " glowed Morgan, rapidly tapping the Nerd Herd counter.

"Thanks buddy", Chuck held up his hands in mock protest as he stood up, "but I was just doing my duty."

"Chuck, for once this isn't about a video game. Although I do still appreciate your skills." 

Morgan's slightly serious tone about something non-game related was almost alarming. Chuck furrowed his brow in confusion.

"The new redhead girl over by the PlayStations. She's totally been checking you out!"

Chuck began to visibly groan. Taking any relationship advice from Morgan was generally a bad idea. Letting him set you up on a date doubly so.

"Look! Look for yourself!"

Chuck glanced up from the Nerd Herd desk towards the PlayStation area. There a new redheaded Buy More sales employee stood looking not at Chuck, but at the PlayStation accessories. 

"Morgan.  I apprec. "

"Chuck! Look, I know today is the rescheduled 'Mourning-Jill-Monday', but c'mon.  I talked to her today.  her name is Charlene, and she's a gamer dude! An old-school gamer! Classy old-school though, like 'olde' that ends with an 'e'."

Morgan was too emphatic to allow Chuck to butt in. "How many women have the code to the original Contra memorized, huh? - that's hot! No, that's 8-bit hotness!"

Chuck stood stunned and paused as if to almost contemplate Morgan's last insight. He put his hand on Morgan's shoulder. His voice carried a slightly deflated mood.

"Buddy, I appreciate what you're trying to do. Really. But.  I'm just not ready for a relationship yet."

"Hey, what's going on?" Lester and Jeff strode back to the Buy More from what they had termed their 'Mac installation artistry'.

"Morgan is trying to set me up with the new girl."

Lester's eyes lit up. "New girl?"

"Yeah", Morgan nodded behind him, "she started yesterday while you guys were out."

Chuck looked at his watch. "Hey, weren't you and Jeff supposed to be back a couple of hours ago?"

Lester glared at Jeff. "Yes, well, that was not coffee that Jeff brought in his thermos. I ended up having to drag him back to the herder."

All eyes turned to Jeff. He did his best to look innocent. "I have coffee in it now", he said sheepishly.

Lester turned around to where Chuck and Morgan had been looking. "So.  what's her story?"

"Lester, she's new. Please don't scare her."

Lester frowned. "Please Charles, I don't need your help. I do fine on my own." He checked his breath and walked towards his intended prey, Jeff in tow.

"Hi. My name is Lester", he said trying to sound suave. "But.  You can think of me as Manos; I kinda take care of the place when the master is away". He motioned towards Big Mike's office. 

Charlene stood dumbfounded. It was too early in the morning to be this surreal.

'Lester' had just introduced himself, and he was already trying a pick-up line on her. A pick-up line that included a quote from an infamously bad movie. To try something like this, 'Lester' must either be adventurous - or aloof.

Charlene observed Lester's sidekick. He was hovering next to him. Jeff had an oddness that differed from yesterday's. His eyes were wide open as they were fixed on Lester's profile. He seemed eager about.  something. She took the chance guess - probably to see if Lester would strike out.

Following her assignment to the letter meant she would need to be free of Lester's attention. There were many ways that she could enjoy dealing with someone like him, but only a couple that wouldn't ruin her cover. 

She was left with no choice, she would go with flexing some of her Nerd-Fu.

"Torgo" she announced.

"Excuse me?" he blurted.

"Torgo. He says 'I am Torgo. I take care of the place while the master is away.'"

She watched Lester sink momentarily and turn towards his still grinning friend. "Yes, well, I could see how you would think that. I'm referring to the original director's edition on which the TV episode was based." He looked on to see if his backpedalling had any effect. 

It did not. Charlene simply shook her head, calling Lester's bluff.

He barely managed to say "Welcome to the Buy More" before turning around and heading back to the safety of the Nerd Herd desk. She could faintly hear Lester's friend say "Pay up!".

She kept her smile on the inside. Some battles could be won without explosives and hand-to-hand combat.
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Re: Chuck vs The Prequel
« Reply #9 on: January 14, 2009, 04:33:34 AM »
Great, a lot of Sarah moments  ;D I like you portrait of Sarah, her probation and problems with Bryce. But the funniest was that Morgan tried to set up a date between Chuck and Charlene, it was hilarious!
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Re: Chuck vs The Prequel
« Reply #10 on: January 14, 2009, 07:21:41 PM »
Great, a lot of Sarah moments  ;D I like you portrait of Sarah, her probation and problems with Bryce. But the funniest was that Morgan tried to set up a date between Chuck and Charlene, it was hilarious!

Yeah, this day's story was really Sarah's introduction.  Glad you liked the Buy More part, it was fun to write.  I am actually convinced there was something between Morgan and the redhead though.  In the vs Truth episode, as Morgan's walking in to the Buy More, she's leaving, and he gives her a quick smile and wink.  ;D

Not the best shot, but best I could find.


There's quite a bit that remains unanswered even yet, but to keep the story going I've been trying to keep it lighter.  From some of the other forum posts here, it seems like others have also wondered about some of the gaps surrounding and since the pilot.

The separation between her and partner is an example.  Somehow Sarah doesn't appear to know that Bryce had been on a mission.  Since it was brought up in the pilot and again in the Nemesis episode, it seemed like there was a reason for it that they never got around to explaining.  In this prequel, she's been separated from him for long enough for him to be on that mission which also sets up some other things - like an additional reason not to shoot the Fulcrum agent in vs the Breakup.  In that episode she pauses again because she doesn't want anyone or anything to hurt Chuck, including herself, and doesn't want to relive the consequences of being a disappointment to the ones she cares about.

Another question I saw brought up here was if Sarah was in to music. :)  I put together some clues from the Delorean, Cougars, Santa Claus, and pilot episodes that points to her definitely loving music.   It also means that her reaction to Chuck's question during their first date in the pilot was rather genuine.  For anyone not familiar with the name of the song she hears on her alarm clock, its the one the show's intro uses an edited version of - so she's not the only one who hears it almost weekly.  :D
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« Reply #11 on: January 15, 2009, 11:12:00 AM »
An update: the next chapter may slip a day to tomorrow, depending on time.

As an aside, a question to Robert or anyone else picking up on the references: Would it add to the story to have a safari-hunt type of list for the days posted so far?

So in addition to the Hitchhiker's reference, hints would also be A-Team, Ghostbusters, Quantum Leap, etc?
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« Reply #12 on: January 15, 2009, 06:32:29 PM »
An update: the next chapter may slip a day to tomorrow, depending on time.

As an aside, a question to Robert or anyone else picking up on the references: Would it add to the story to have a safari-hunt type of list for the days posted so far?

So in addition to the Hitchhiker's reference, hints would also be A-Team, Ghostbusters, Quantum Leap, etc?


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« Reply #13 on: January 17, 2009, 11:37:22 AM »
Wednesday, 19th
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"STAY IN THE VAN!"

Casey grunted.  He had a difficult time telling himself to stay put.  He might need to say it again just to keep himself awake.

When Casey had transferred to become a member of the NSA, he knew that things would be different.  Duties that had included flying jets and blowing things up would be traded for new types of missions. In order to better serve his country, he was willing to give up half of that action. A position at the NSA would still include some regular gunplay, and he would certainly get to blow things up from time to time. 

As he sat alone, he did the math. A mission like this had none of that; half of nothing was still nothing.

Casey could feel his attention waining.  He felt himself daydreaming about ways to shoot or otherwise blow up the dog.  It was the only way he thought he would ever be free from listening to the ambassador's constantly inane monologue of how he needed to pamper his poodle.  The various methods that led to the pet's demise made Casey grunt with relief.

It had been nearly five weeks of intercepting encrypted communications and still he hadn't discovered anything that would suggest that the ambassador was transferring any stolen secrets.

He ate another chocolate chip cookie to refocus on the task at hand.

An incoming call on one of the van's monitors disrupted his boredom.  He straightened himself in his seat immediately.

"Major Casey.  This is a secure line?"

"Yes ma'am, secure."

General Beckman continued, "Good, I am reassigning you to a new mission as of this moment.  There's an immediate security matter in Washington that I need you to handle personally."

Casey's wish fulfillment caused him to speak out of turn, "What kind of security matter?"

"We have recently become aware of a traitor within the CIA.  This traitor may be working with a group plotting against this country."

Casey became invigorated with an added sense of purpose.  "What shall we do when we come in contact with this.  CIA traitor?"

"Major Casey, we all have our skillsets.   You will do what you do well.  If there are no other questions I will brief you further on your arrival."

Casey shook his head, "Understood, no questions ma'am."

The image of General Beckman went dark. 

Casey hummed with pleasure. 

A traitor was no better than any villain, any terrorist, or any other "bad guy" that he had to deal with.  Anyone who fell into one of these groups directly opposed the United States, and in doing so, directly opposed him. 

In some ways a traitor was even worse.  A traitor not only betrayed whatever they had stood for, but also betrayed their country and the people they had worked with.  A traitor was a disgrace to anyone who had ever believed in that person. 

He remembered the first traitor he was responsible for apprehending.  A federal agent by the name of Dobson had attempted to kidnap a protected government asset and sell her to the highest bidder.  Casey's early dedication to his craft led him to Dobson in relatively short order.

Casey could once again feel the anticipation of that day. He had been permitted to interrogate Dobson in order to discover who he had been in contact with.  His superiors had instructed Casey to only utilize the standard intimidation techniques to draw out the information.  The younger NSA agent however got carried away in the moment and found himself using a more hands-on approach.  Thinking back on it now, he wouldn't have changed a thing. 

He had gotten his information quickly, and it had all been validated.  In the process, he had even impressed a General who had been observing through the interrogation room window.  The General had been impressed with his level of efficiency.  When Casey left the room, the General told him that 'off the record', he gave him 'a gold star in his book'.

Casey's experience on missions and his years in the business had taught him that pain could indeed be scary.

His quickening pulse brought him back to the present.  He grunted with pleasure again.  The CIA had a traitor on board, a traitor that they couldn't deal with themselves.  The NSA would never have a problem like this.  Agents like Major John Casey would see to that. 

Casey drew his gun, and admired it for a while.  During this kind of mission, there would definitely be gunplay. 

This was going to be fun.

   ---------------

It was only halfway into Sarah's day off, and she wasn't having fun.  She had already run out of things to do while at her apartment.

She sat up and nibbled on her pecan and cinnamon pastry.

As much as she had told herself she wouldn't think about him, her thoughts turned to Bryce. 

What had she done to him that he would continue to give her the cold shoulder? 

Sarah sighed loudly and looked down towards her toes.

Whatever it had been, she wished that she could understand and be forgiven.  It just wasn't the same without him, there was an emptiness that was beginning to get the better of her.

"Snap out of it Walker," she addressed to herself.  An agent would never become this distracted.

She got up and stood next to the window.  She looked down and started watching the normal everyday people she kept safe when she successfully completed her mission objectives. 

Sarah began hearing the familiar echoes of her dad.

"Angel, you know I need you on this - I can't do it by myself." he told a much younger Jenny.

Jenny looked down at her bruised knee.

"We can do this!" he continued on with an increasingly encouraging tone.

Her father's attempt to win her over was being an uphill battle.

"Look honey; everyone lies, everyone cheats, and everyone steals.  If we don't do it, someone else will."

"C'mon, it's what we do.  It's the reason today you got to be 'Tricia McMillan'.  It's the reason you got a new bike, a new Walkman, and why we get to live like this!"

Jenny looked up at her father.  Her face portrayed her true state of mind.

"How come I can't have any friends?"

Her father paused for a moment as he began fishing for the right words before sitting down next to her.

"They're not good enough," he finally answered.

"Those people you see out there, they're just normal everyday people."

"You don't want to be normal.  You and I are better than that."

"Normal people," he began to emphasize, "are stuck in their dull, boring lives.  They limit themselves to the same place, the same house, the same car.  They don't have any variety or any excitement.  That's part of what makes them normal." 

"Besides, being normal means being forced to settle instead of getting what you really want."

"But you know why they do that darlin?  It's because they're too trusting.  They're too willing to listen to people like us because they are missing something.  They let themselves get talked into things, they let themselves get conned, and they let themselves get hurt."

"You don't want to be like that do you?"

Jenny shook her head.

"Right!  Look at us!  We're living our dream!"

"We have the kind of life that normal people are jealous of.  We aren't dull.  We aren't limited.  We get to travel across the country.  We get to see new places.  We get to meet new people.  We get to be whoever we want.  And, we get to buy ourselves whatever we want."

Her father's salesmanship began to take effect, Jenny smiled slightly.

His tone became more serious.  "Honey, you can't left yourself be normal.  You have to be careful who you trust.  The only person I trust in this whole world is you.  You know that right?"

Jenny nodded.

"Good," he said with a smile, "because what I want is for us to have fun.  and anything and everything we dream of!"

Sarah continued to observe as the people below walked along the shops, sat together at outdoor cafes, and met up with friends.  They seemed happy enough, and didn't appear bothered by so many self-imposed limitations.

She glanced around her apartment.  Her dad had another 7 months to go before he would be out of prison. 

She shook her head slowly.  She felt almost embarrassed to admit to herself that she used to think of those con jobs as 'quality family time'.

Sarah turned for another piece of sweet comfort food, only to notice that it too was also absent from the room.

"Damn," even her attention to detail had been affected.

Her voice carried sharp sarcasm as it repeated a line that had been drilled into her mind: "A good con man can get out of town any time he wants."

How did he excuse his situation now, or any of the other times he had been caught? 

Jenny had been left behind before.  She understood it was necessary for her dad to go on solo missions, and that when she did get a chance to be involved, that she wouldn't be needed for every step.

She had looked after herself staying in hotels or while waiting patiently in the car.  There had always been a TV or radio to keep her company. 

Sarah began to slightly frown.  One of the cafe employees had put out a sign advertising their Thanksgiving themed coffee. 

Thanksgiving was one of the three holidays she didn't care for.  Thanksgiving, Christmas, and New Year's all felt alien to her.  There was something about them that made her feel uncomfortably out of place.

Her favorite Thanksgiving so far had been when Jenny wasn't needed for one of her dad's con jobs.  He had left her at a nicer than typical hotel because "she was worth it".  After he left, she began flipping through the channels on TV, enjoying the meal from room service. 

Many of the channels featured crowds of cheering people at one parade or another.  To Jenny it was incomprehensible.  Why would all those people so willingly stand in the cold together like that?  Eventually she flipped to some kind of comedy channel.  It was running a marathon of episodes from a show that she couldn't get enough of. 

Sarah's frown began to convert into a faint smile. 

Why couldn't there be more in life like that show, she wondered.  It had made her feel good.  It had a simple premise: a guy and some robots made fun of the movies they were forced to watch.  The jokes they made and the things they pointed out were all clear and straight to the point.  In between movies, the show's characters even jokingly gave each other a hard time, but it looked like they were always having fun and it always seemed like each day ended on a happy note.  The most surprising thing to Jenny had been just how much it made her laugh.

Sarah felt the corners of her faint smile begin to fade.  She hadn't laughed like that since Jenny had on that day - at least not without it needing to appear as part of some con or cover.

She wondered what it must be like for an everyday person to feel normal.  As an agent with the CIA, she knew that life was really much more complicated than they would ever realize.  Even so, there was still some appeal to it. 

She had hoped her relationship with Bryce would be less complicated.  Normal people had relationships too, and this one had nothing to do with the CIA's involvement.  There shouldn't be any hidden agendas, no ulterior motives, no lies, and no one getting betrayed.

Why hadn't the CIA given her the details of her first mission back on the job?  Right now she felt like she would take almost any kind of mission, preferably if it would be with Bryce.  She wished for another holiday together.  Something felt different between them, she just couldn't put her finger on it.

Sarah noticed the faint reflection of Jenny in the window.  She took a deep breath.  This lack of control was exactly the kind of distraction that had gotten her benched in the first place.  Sarah Walker would do something more constructive with her time.

She grabbed her gloves and walked towards the dining room. 

There her punching bag waited for another of her therapeutic workouts.

   ---------------

Casey felt like punching something. 

He looked at the live satellite image to find out why he had been sitting in traffic for nearly 45 minutes.  Ahead an accident was in the process of being cleaned up - on the other side of the highway.  Casey gripped his steering wheel tightly. 

"Rubberneckers!"  Rubberneckers were keeping him from getting to DC on time. 

He growled at the morons ahead of him. 

Casey turned to face his trusted copilot.  He gathered a full breath of air before slowly exhaling.

"Sorry sir," he said apologetically to the photo of President Reagan.

Reagan was riding shotgun tonight with a small bonsai tree.  Casey knew by looking at the contents of the passenger seat that he would have to remain calm.  He needed a distraction and he needed it now.

Casey focused his thoughts on how he enjoyed travelling light.  All he had in the Crown Vic were his assorted weaponry organized neatly in the trunk, his photo, the bonsai tree, and the new handgun he had recently been taking everywhere.

"My gun!"  He had almost forgotten that while searching for his sanity during his mission that he decided to name his gun.  It seemed the proper thing to do after spending this much time together.

The guy that operated his preferred shooting range had suggested 'Vera'.  He liked the name 'Vera', but 'Vera' sounded better for a bigger type of gun - maybe a sniper rifle.

Casey had been partial to the name 'Diane', but his boss would never approve of that.

He imagined himself drawing his weapon on a badguy.  "Zoe!" he shouted.  'Zoe' had a nice sound to it - powerful, but calm.  Calm was not the way he felt when he got to fire a weapon.

Casey imagined himself drawing his weapon again.  "Emily!" he said surprising himself.  'Emily?'  'Emily' was a happy sounding name.  His imaginary villain was smiling back at him.  Nobody should be smiling at him when he had his gun pointed at them.

He tried again.  "Ilsa!"  Casey paused before grunting with pleasure.  'Ilsa' was a great name.  It conveyed power, control, finesse, skill, and an undeniable sexiness.  Casey's gun demonstrated most of those traits, but it wasn't deserving of a name like 'Ilsa'.  'Ilsa' was the kind of name that he'd grant to a stealth fighter.

He needed a name that said power and control without the happy parts.  He imagined drawing his weapon at the badguy.  "Mother!" he said assertively.  'Mother' felt like the right name.  Who didn't obey their mother?  Who always had the final say in one's destiny?  'Mother' was the perfect name.  Casey's imaginary villain was laughing at him.  He shook his head.

This traffic jam needed to stop now.  The satellite image showed he was getting pretty close, but not quite there yet.  Casey rolled his eyes at his misfortune.

Naming a gun shouldn't be this hard.  Pilots named planes all the time, and no one sat around like this coming up with a name like 'Mother'. 

He grunted in frustration at his equivalent of writer's block.  As he drew his weapon, his imaginary villain yawned while waiting for him to introduce his gun.

"Saffron!" he mumbled in desperation.  Casey raised his eyebrow at the thought.

"About time!" he yelled as he stomped on the gas pedal.  He had finally reached and surpassed the source of his automotive anger. 

Maybe now he could actually make it to DC.

   ---------------

Casey stood tall and saluted.

"At ease Major," General Beckman said.

"Our intel suggests that a rogue group of agents we have recently become aware of are planning to target one of five possible government facilities.  You will be responsible for ascertaining which is the intended target, and preventing them from their objectives."

Casey noted the pause in the General's speech as his opportunity to ask his first question, "What do we know about this rogue group of agents?"

"We know that they have been actively recruiting burned agents, and recently at least one active duty agent."

General Beckman presented a stack of photos to Casey.

"The man sitting on the park bench is Phillip Cowen.  From what we have been able to determine he is the group's primary recruiter.  His latest recruit is the CIA agent Bryce Larkin.  We believe that he is the traitor that they will use to break in to one of our joint-venture research facilities."

"Agent Larkin's most recent partner at the CIA is an agent by the name of Sarah Walker.  Currently she is off of active field duty, and hasn't yet had any direct contact with the members of this rogue group."

"I want you to assemble and lead the security team to make sure that this group does not succeed in whatever they are planning.  Keep an eye on both Larkin and Walker.  Am I clear Major Casey?"

"Yes ma'am, crystal clear." said Casey failing to hide his eager smile.

"Good, you are dismissed.  Happy hunting."
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Re: Chuck vs The Prequel
« Reply #14 on: January 17, 2009, 01:34:18 PM »
Great chapter, the Casey stuff was hilarious. His problems with naming his gun was one of the funniest moment ever  ;D
Your portrait of Sarah is interesting, I see what you want with this but aren't she too depending on Bryce ?
The "Jenny" moments was pretty good, it was interesting to read more about Sarah's past.
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