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Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« on: March 15, 2009, 04:01:13 PM »
Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away is a story idea I had while doing vs The Prequel. 
It takes place after the DeLorean episode, and before Santa Claus.
The goal is to give it the style and organization of an actual episode - including more dialog and action than my last effort.
It'll be broken up into 6 parts to approximately follow where the commercial breaks would be.

Standard disclaimers apply about not owning Chuck, etc.  Hope you enjoy!



Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away : Part I
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"Hey sis!" Chuck said with an alert tone.

"Morning," Ellie answered looking at her watch, "you're up early.   well, 45 minutes early.  What's the occasion?"

"Emmett's calling me in for some emergency at the Buy More."

"And why then are you in a good mood?" she asked in her protective voice.

"Because," he said with a grin, "whatever's going on at the Buy More made him desperate enough to trade 45 minutes today for a few extra days off around the holidays."

Ellie's smile told him his answer eased his big sister's concerns.  "I assume you're going to put that time to good use with Sarah?"

Chuck looked up from his coffee.  "Just what are you implying Ellie Bartowski?" he asked playfully.

Ellie blushed slightly.  "I didn't mean - I just know that the holidays can be a special time, and I want the two of you to be happy together."

"It would be nice.  wouldn't it?" he heard himself accidentally admit.

"Why wouldn't it be?  Chuck?  What's wrong?"

Chuck kicked himself.  If his relationship with Sarah was anywhere near normal he wouldn't have a need to filter everything he said through a cover story.  Instead, his mind struggled to constantly maintain the right responses by putting the spy world over his heart. 

"Nothing.   Nothing sis," he attempted to backtrack, "I - I just have to see if Sarah's free on my new days off." 

Ellie nodded trying to imply she was following, without actually following.

"Well, do you have any plans yet?" she continued.

Chuck began to grow increasingly uncomfortable.  There would be no way for him to make something up without knowing what the spy world would throw at him next. 

"Still working on it," he said as he headed towards the door, "Maybe we can talk about it later, I need to get going so I get those days off.  See you."

Ellie watched her brother disappear behind the closing door.  "Okay. Hope so."

***********

Chuck barely managed to make his way into the entrance of the Buy More before Emmett began running towards him. 

"Ch-- Ch--" Emmett struggled to say.

Chuck couldn't tell if Emmett was out of breath or simply hyperventilating.  "Relax.   slow breaths.   What's going on?"

"It's.  It's Big Mike's computer.  It won't start up this morning," he said waving his hand towards Big Mike's office, "and you know how he gets without his fishing forecast!"

"You're right," Chuck said sarcastically, "that does sound like an emergency."

"I know we've had our differences in the past Chuck," he said regaining his composure, "but you've got to do this.  He asked for you specifically."  Emmett straighted himself as tall as he could.  "Do it for Buymoria!"

"Buy-what?" Chuck said in confusion.

Emmett gave Chuck a sinister glare.  "Don't tell me you don't recognize this great nation."

"Whatever," Chuck said walking passed him, "I'll take care of it."

***********

Chuck began with his usual set of automated diagnostics.  The screen estimated the tests would take at least an hour and a half to complete. 

As Chuck sat watching the progress bar eventually advance from 0 to 1%, he realized he once had found this kind of work exciting.

The promotion from sales associate to Nerd Herder had felt like a big one at the time, but it wasn't all he had hoped it would be.  The pay wasn't particularly much higher, and while he did get to drive a company car, he felt like the time spent out on calls had caused him to lose touch with the friends he had made at the store. 

He had tried the last few days to reconnect with some of his coworkers, but he couldn't shake the feeling that he was a bit of a stranger to the rest of them.  During his time as the Intersect, that feeling had grown.  He mostly missed his friendship with Morgan, but now days at the Buy More had begun feeling like they were his 'other job'.

He looked at the screen again.  The progress bar remained at 1%. 

"Okay, this is taking too long, even for me.  Gotta find something to do." he said standing up.  Noticing some shipping boxes that someone had left on the showroom floor, he mused "Well, it's better than nothing."

Repeating a task he had done so many times earlier in his Buy More career, he took the boxes outside to the appropriate recycle container.  As he closed the lid and turned around, he threw his hands up.

"Hi," said the man holding the gun.

"I get it, okay, moving supplies are expensive.  Take all the boxes you want,"  Chuck nervously said pointing to the container, "no need for guns."

"I'm not here for boxes. " he said looking at the Nerd Herd name tag, "'Chuck'.  Where is she now?"

"Uh, she?  She who?"

"Don't play stupid.  I saw you talking to her - the female agent - yesterday."

Chuck's eyes widened.

"I see you know what I mean, so stop wasting my time.  I saw her here today.  When she spotted me she glanced at you before disappearing."

For a moment Chuck was stunned more by the realization he had somehow failed to notice Sarah than by his current predicament.

"Know what 'Chuck'?  I've got a better idea." he said pulling a different looking gun from his jacket. 

Chuck cringed as he felt the shot hit him.  Looking down he saw the needle end of a dart sticking into his shoulder. 

"Oh God" he cried as he felt himself becoming lightheaded and collapsing.

As he watched his vision blur, he heard the familiar sounds of Casey's silencer.  The would-be kidnapper quickly fell in pain.

Chuck watched the blob of Buy More green kneel down next to him.  Despite the effects of the tranquilizer, he tried his best to scream "Casey!"

The touch of a soft hand checking his pulse finally made him feel safe.

"Sarah. " he mumbled before passing out.
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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #1 on: March 15, 2009, 07:19:52 PM »
Great start dzeims.  A little heavy on the Tom Swifties at the start ie
"Hey sis!" Chuck said with an alert tone.

"And why then are you in a good mood?" she asked in her protective voice.

"Because," he said with a grin, "whatever's going on at the Buy More made him desperate enough to trade 45 minutes today for a few extra days off around the holidays."

Chuck looked up from his coffee.  "Just what are you implying Ellie Bartowski?" he asked playfully.

but they disappeared as the story progressed.

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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2009, 03:54:54 AM »
Great start! I'm looking forward for the next part :D
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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #3 on: March 16, 2009, 05:36:28 AM »
Aye good start. Definitely makes me want to read the next part, kind of annoyed I got to this so early so the next chapter isn’t up already.
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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #4 on: March 16, 2009, 07:11:43 PM »
Great start dzeims.  A little heavy on the Tom Swifties at the start ie
"Hey sis!" Chuck said with an alert tone.

but they disappeared as the story progressed.

Thanks OD, hadn't heard of a Tom Swifty before.  Learn something new all the time.   ;D
Things like Tom Swifties and passive voice are probably among my most frequent errors.  Thanks for the tip!

Great start! I'm looking forward for the next part :D
Aye good start. Definitely makes me want to read the next part, kind of annoyed I got to this so early so the next chapter isn’t up already.

Thanks.  If I'm lucky, I'll have the next part done tonight.
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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #5 on: March 16, 2009, 08:35:12 PM »
Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away : Part II
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Chuck groaned as he regained consciousness. 

As far as he could tell, he was still outside and now sitting up against a wall.

In front of him he could make out two white blobs and one green blob.  "What happened?  Did you get him?" he asked.

Morgan's voice replied to his question, "Get who Chuck?"

Rubbing his eyes, he began seeing clearly.  Morgan, Anna, and Skip were standing in front of him.

"You okay Chuckles?"  Anna asked.

"Yeah, I think.  Had the strangest dream. "

Chuck blinked a few more times before looking around.  There were no bad guys with guns holding him hostage, nor any tranquilizer darts sticking out of him.

Morgan and Anna helped him to his feet.  "Looks like you must've passed out or something."

Chuck smiled weakly.  "Guess that's what I get for skipping my Berry Loops."

"Dude, you know how important breakfast is," Morgan began lecturing, "ooh, here comes Emmett.  See ya back inside."

"Thanks," Chuck said rubbing his temples.

"Chuck," Emmett said trying to sound sympathetic, "I just heard about your 'incident'.  Since your injury happened during your shift on the Buy More premises, I've brought these forms for you to sign for your worker's compensation."

"I'm fine." Chuck insisted.

"Oh," Emmett replied in surprise, "Well, in that case take all the time getting the free- I mean 'fresh' air you need."

"Thanks." Chuck said dryly.  He looked around once more, but couldn't see any signs of what he had imagined.

Chuck walked back into the store and sat down at the Nerd Herd desk, hoping to clear the remaining cobwebs from his head. 

Morgan appeared out of nowhere.  "Hey, you okay?" he asked.

"Yeah buddy, just a little out of focus."

"No, I mean your shoulder dude."

After trying to process everything he thought had happened, he hadn't realized he was scratching his shoulder at all.  Looking closer, Chuck noticed a tiny hole in his shirt.  Under that hole an altogether itchy bump had formed. 

He quickly stood up and fought the dizziness that remained.  "On second thought, I'm gonna go see Sarah - okay?"

"Alright. " Morgan said with a smirk, "a little Nurse Walker and patient Bartowski.  rock-n-roll. "

"Morgan. " he began to protest, pointing his finger at the bearded perv. 

"Nevermind." Chuck concluded before walking out the door.

"Hey, are we still on for lunch?" Morgan yelled after him.

***********

Chuck quickly made his way down the stairway into Castle.

"Hey, I appreciate you guys saving my life.  You got anything for this itch?"

"Sounds like a personal problem Bartowski" Casey chuckled.

"Ha ha.  I mean my shoulder, where the dart hit me."

Casey and Sarah dropped what they were doing.  "Chuck," Sarah worriedly asked, "what dart?"

"You know.  The dart from the guy Casey shot at the Buy More."

"Bartowski, I haven't been to the Buy More yet."

Chuck's eyes widened. 

Sarah stood up.  "Okay, Chuck, start over.  Tell us what happened."

"Uh.  I was at the Buy More, and I took some boxes out to the back recycle container.  When I turned around, there was this guy.  And he was looking for you Sarah.  Then he shot me with a dart gun and when I started passing out I heard Casey shoot the guy.  And then you checked on me.  Morgan and Anna were there when I woke up."

The more Chuck told his story, the more the two agents looked alarmed.

"I saw you Casey.  Well.  I couldn't exactly see you, but I heard your gun. "

Chuck tried to fight the unease from their silence, " .and who else would enjoy sporting Buy More green.  right?"

"Casey," Sarah commanded.

Casey sat down to a computer station and began typing.  "Already on it."

Sarah guided Chuck into one of the chairs at their command table.  "Now tell me about the person who shot you.  Did you flash on him?"

"No, I didn't flash.  He was-" Chuck tried hard to remember his attacker, "just some guy.  A little shorter that me I guess.  He had a real gun, and then shot me with the dart gun he had in his jacket."

Chuck brought his eyes back to Sarah's.  "Sorry, that's all I can remember."

"Great work Bartowski. "

Sarah glared at her partner.  "Casey, lay off.  It's okay Chuck, we'll get something from the cameras.  Let's get something for that itch."

"Walker," Casey interrupted, "we've got a bigger problem."

"What do you mean 'bigger problem'?" Chuck asked.

"I mean, the footage from the camera that covers that area is missing."

"What about the satellite coverage?" Sarah asked.

"Blocked by the roof overhang."

Chuck tried to keep up with what was going on.  "What do you mean the footage is 'missing'?"

"Don't know.  Gone, blanked out, missing."

"Move Casey," Chuck said waving his hands, "let me do my thing."

Sarah tried in vain to stifle the smile watching David try to shoo Goliath.

"Fine," Casey relented.

Chuck took his position and ceremoniously cracked his knuckles. 

Casey rolled his eyes at the demonstration.  "Get on with it Bartowski."

"Let's see here. " Chuck said as he began typing.  "Looks like the camera footage has been-"

"Has been what?" Sarah inquired.

"Has been deleted." Chuck said with a puzzled look on his face.  "That can't be right."

Sarah leaned in.  "Can you get it back?"

Chuck resumed his rapid typing.  "I'll try."

Casey turned to Sarah.  "Walker, if someone's identified you, your cover is blown.  We'll need to contact General Beckman."

Chuck stopped typing to notice Sarah's worried look.  "Uh guys, it's gone.  The video feed looks like it was scrambled before it was erased."  He paused for a moment hoping to hear something from either agent.  "So what do we do now?"

Casey glanced at Sarah.  "Well, we can't let another fugitive go," he answered sarcastically. "Bartowski and I will go check on the camera while Walker stays put in Castle."

"C'mon," he said motioning for Chuck to follow.

***********

Retracing Chuck's steps out through the back doors, Chuck and Casey came upon another Buy More employee laying on the ground.

"Jeff!" Chuck yelled as he ran towards his fellow Nerd Herder.

"Huh?" Jeff said groggily sitting up.  "Not cool.  You interrupted my nap."

Chuck looked at his watch.  "Jeff, it's not even 10:30."

"I was not meant for this time zone," he replied as he laid back down.

"Right.  well, I'm just going to show John here how to install and repair the security camera from the Buy More's spy shop."

Casey growled.

"Sorry, best I could come up with," he whispered.

Casey unfolded the ladder and climbed up to the camera.  After inspecting the gear, he shook his head.

"What does that mean?" Chuck asked loudly.

"Shh." Casey hushed.

"It means," he said after climbing back down, "that no one's touched the camera."

"But how do you know-"  Chuck began to ask.

"Layers of dust moron.   If someone had done something to it, there would be a smudge or they would've cleaned it off completely."

"Makes sense," Chuck agreed shaking his head, "what's next?"

"We do this the old fashioned way," he answered with a frown, "we ask if anyone here saw someone at the Buy More who didn't belong."

"You mean like detectives?" Chuck asked eagerly.

"Just get in the store Bartowski" Casey answered, shoving Chuck towards the doors.

***********

"Lester," Chuck started as he walked up to the helpdesk, "have you by any chance seen.  oh, I don't know, any 'extra' employees today?"

"I see what you're trying to do Charles," Lester said proudly, "and let me tell you, from personal experience, you do not want to follow this path."

Chuck's lack of progress wore his patience thin.  "What could you possibly be talking about?"

"As a former member of management, I can say that once you begin worrying about proper procedures around here, it is a slippery slope.  A SLIPPERY SLOPE to career destruction.  You do NOT want to go there."

Chuck found himself feeling like Casey-lite.  "Lester," he snapped back, "just tell me if you've seen anyone here that isn't a customer and doesn't work here!"

"No- Nobody, I swear!" he confessed.

"Great," he said slapping the desk out of frustration.  Chuck had asked nearly everyone who was on the schedule today, except for.  Emmett.

Chuck surveyed the floor and spotted Casey trying to get answers out of him.  "Oh, that's not going to end well," he muttered before deciding to flee for the safety of the Orange Orange.

***********

Sarah and Chuck tried to avoid the inevitable anger from Casey as he entered Castle.

"Remind me to ask Beckman for permission to kill that man." he grumbled.

The communications display flipped on with General Beckman's likeness filling the screen.

"Ask me what Major?"

Casey reached the bottom of the stairs and stood straight.  "Nothing General.  We were just about to contact you."

"Yes," she continued, "the incident with the Intersect.  The man's name is Roper Williams.  He is a mid-level mercenary for hire.  While in your vicinity, he spotted an agent that apparently has a bounty on her head.  Unfortunately the Intersect was in the wrong place at the wrong time."

Chuck was the first to feel caught off guard.  "Wait - when did the Buy More become the Spy More?" he interjected.

General Beckman paused to let him know to stop talking.

"Right, sorry." Chuck apologized.

"We can't have any more unexpected visitors.  I am sending the agent over immediately.  You are to cooperate with her to track down and resolve this matter.  She is not to know the identity of the Intersect, and the details of her current mission are off limits to your team.  Am I clear?"

"Yes ma'am," Casey answered for the group, "but I don't understand.  I perform background checks on all of the employees at the shopping center. I-"

General Beckman interrupted him, "I have to say Major that I'm a little disappointed.  Deal with it."

The screen went blank. 

Watching Casey tense was like watching a volcano getting ready to explode.

"I'm sure you did your best. " Chuck offered.

Sarah put her hand on Chuck's.  "Not now." she whispered out of concern.

"So who would've known to come back to the Buy More?"  Chuck inquired.  "Ilsa?  Carina?  Oh, please don't be Carina," Chuck began wishing, "please please please. "

"I've never been a Carina," claimed the voice behind them.

Sarah and Casey drew their weapons and swivelled around.

"YOU???" Casey grunted.

"What- How!?!" asked Chuck in disbelief.

Sarah felt her jaw drop.  "My God."
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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #6 on: March 17, 2009, 04:56:10 AM »
Nice twist thus far. I am racking my brain trying to think who could be the agent, The BuyMore green shirt has me confused as there is only that red headed girl with the glasses that I can remember as a female green shirt.

You've hooked me and now its a commercial break. Damn you Dzeims   :D
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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #7 on: March 17, 2009, 06:01:36 AM »
Thanks OD, hadn't heard of a Tom Swifty before.  Learn something new all the time..   ;D
Things like Tom Swifties and passive voice are probably among my most frequent errors.  Thanks for the tip!
Most welcome.  Yeah, Tim Swifties date back to the Tom Swift and the Incredible XXXX line of books.  Out around the same time as Hardy Boys and Nancy Drew.  Tom Swift was the nerd version.  Hey, they don't call me OldDarth for nothing!

Passive voice and maintaining viewpoint are likely the two most common errors of writing.  I highly recommend Stephen King's On Writing book.  It is a mix of autobiographical and writing tips.

Another good resource for writing tips is here:  Writing Tips from SF Author Rober J. Sawyer.

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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #8 on: March 17, 2009, 04:25:53 PM »
Great part! Nice ending, I really wonder who the new agent is!
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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #9 on: March 20, 2009, 08:14:07 PM »
I'm sorry it took so long between parts.  I really didn't want to leave it like that for most of the week.   :-[



Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away : Part III
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"Hi Chuck, John," the agent greeted them. 

"Sarah, we haven't really met before," she said holding out her hand, "I'm 'Charlene' - also with the CIA."

Sarah looked at her in disbelief.  'Charlene' as her name tag read, was the redhead sales associate she had seen at the Buy More.  She was one of Chuck's co-workers that he didn't regularly spend much time around.  Now a Buy More employee that had otherwise not caught her attention was standing in a government operations center, wearing her green and khaki uniform.  "I have to say I'm surprised," Sarah admitted while shaking Charlene's hand.

"It's always the quiet ones right?" Charlene said smiling back.

Casey looked at her with contempt.  "Well before we all start getting friendly around here, in case you hadn't noticed, this isn't the Buy More.  It's Major Casey to you.  Second, how did you get in here without tripping the security system?"

"General Beckman gave me the access code to one of the entrances from the Buy More, so I thought I'd come here the proper way."

"What do you mean 'the proper way'?" he asked, finally putting away his gun.

"Joh--, Major Casey, the security sensors protecting that entrance were recalled a few months ago.  They're pretty easy to bypass."

Chuck and Sarah turned and looked at Casey.  "Not a word out of either of you," he threatened, "How do you know about the recall?"

"It's part of my job to track things like that.  closer to my area of expertise."

"Hey, wait a minute," Chuck realized, "since when did you start speaking with an accent?"

"This is my accent.  The one you're used to is just for cover," Charlene continued noticing Chuck's confusion, " .Chuck, with all the movies and TV you watch, it shouldn't be that much of a surprise that someone like me can do an American accent."

Sarah looked up and briefly glared at her.

Casey grinned.  "Well Walker.  I think I'm starting to like her.  Now," he said turning serious, "what happened to the camera feed.  and how the hell did you manage to avoid showing up on any of my background checks?"

"Making sure I don't stand out on background checks and keeping anyone else from seeing what the camera recorded are both mission related."

Charlene saw that her answer wasn't sufficient for Major Casey.  "Orders. " she added.

Casey thought for a moment before nodding and sitting down, much to Chuck's surprise.

"Mind if I take a seat too?" Charlene asked, "It's been a busy morning."

"Yeah, about that." Chuck chimed in, "I guess I should be thanking you for saving my life.  It seems so weird. ", he trailed off looking uncomfortable, "not that you couldn't save my life or anything, but I guess I didn't expect yet another spy to be at the Buy More."

"Anyway," he continued with a pause, "what exactly happened.  this morning.  to me?"

"Bad timing, " Charlene said sitting down.  "I recognized the guy that attacked you.  I knew he was the work for hire type, but I wasn't sure if he was here for me or maybe for whatever makes you special.  When I watched him follow you out the back, I made my way around and kept him from taking off with you.  Once I made sure you were okay, I 'took care of the situation'.  By the time I got back to the Buy More, I saw that a couple of your friends were already looking after you."

Casey narrowed his eyes.  "What makes you think Bartowski here is somehow special?"

"Well," she said trying to choose her words carefully, "No offense Chuck, but it doesn't appear you're exactly a fully trained field agent,"

"None taken." Chuck clarified.

"and while I'm pretty sure no one else at the store is really paying any attention to what's going on, there's a habit for you guys to talk a little too loud about being spies and about spy-related activities just before leaving the store."

Sarah watched the anger return to Casey's face. 

Chuck took his turn to ask the next question, "What happened to the guy that shot me?  Is he. "

"Just wounded - and being questioned soon, if not already, about what he knows."

"Wow, how did you do all that?"

Charlene lightly smiled but didn't answer. 

Casey stood up and slammed his fist down onto the table, "It means, idiot, that she had help.  She's probably not the only agent around here that we don't know about."

"Wait, Casey, where are you going?" Chuck asked.

"I've got some sensors to replace." he angrily replied.

"But what about the guy that shot me, or the mission?" Chuck persisted.

"Oh, don't you worry," Casey grumbled menacingly while storming out of the room, "I'll be listening."

"So," Sarah said hoping to shake the feeling of being the odd one out, "why was someone at the Buy More looking for you?"

"Here's as much as General Beckman's allowing me share with you: it might be related to my previous mission.  A European research lab had been contracted by the US military to produce a supercooling chemical code-named 'Wonderflonium'.  There was an intelligence report that a security breach had taken place there and that a large sample of the chemical had been stolen.  The lab didn't want to lose its funding, so they refused to cooperate and even tried to cover the whole thing up.  I was sent in to collect any information they didn't want us to know about."

"Not long after, we got a lead that it was going to be sold on the black market, and that the exchange was likely going to take place soon.  I was added to the team responsible for tracking and recapturing the stolen canister.  Another team was assigned to identify the buyer."

"After a couple months of him just barely getting away, I managed to follow him to the US and capture him here in LA.  Lucky for us, he was still carrying the canister with him, and it was still intact.  From what I understood, the other team never managed to identify who the buyer would have been."

"Wow, that sounds pretty cool," Chuck enthusiastically said, "but what about the guy that shot me?"

"The guy that shot you Chuck, Roper Williams, was someone the other team suspected might have been hired to help secure the sale of the Wonderflonium.  The General believes that the buyer wasn't too happy that I killed the deal, and that this 'Williams' was kept on, among other things, to find me.  He apparently didn't have any trouble getting onto the Buy More's WiFi network, because he used it to make a call."

Chuck turned to Sarah, trying to be helpful.  "It's easy for anybody to get on the wireless network - they always make the password 'Buy More' plus the store number."

"He must have thought calling that way wouldn't be as easy to trace as a regular phone call." Charlene continued, "Since I'm responsible for monitoring the store's network, I was able to get a location for whoever he called."

"Ouch," Chuck said grimacing, "that's a lot of Jeff and Lester traffic to filter through.  you have my sympathies."

"Thanks," Charlene said slightly laughing, "The other side of that call came from a chemical lab about 30 minutes from here.  If the original Wonderflonium research data was also stolen, it might give someone at this lab the ability to produce their own sample.  General Beckman's orders are for us to get a clearer idea of what's going on and do what we can to keep that from happening."

"Chuck," Charlene continued, "our first task is for the two of us to get in and bug their network."

Chuck raised his hand.  "What about Sarah and Casey?"

"They'll be outside, monitoring the feed."

Chuck's smiled to himself until he noticed Sarah's gaze.  "Sorry.  it's just that.  you know, me - van.  okay.  But hey," he said trying to avoid the awkwardness, "why me?  Why not Sarah or Casey?"

"It's okay Chuck." Sarah replied partially for her own benefit.

"Out of the four of us," Charlene explained, "you and I are going to look the most like repair personnel.  Plus our technical backgrounds will help us sell our cover."

Chuck laughed for a moment.  "Yeah, 'cop-face' had a problem with that kind of cover."

"One question though," Chuck inquired turning more serious, "what happens if they make their own 'Wonder-whatever'?"

The redhead shrugged.  "It made a lot of them really nervous when the original sample was stolen.  They never gave me high enough clearance to learn why."

"We'll need some equipment from my apartment." she stated standing up. 

She turned and looked down at Chuck.  "Want to come along?"

Chuck squirmed in his seat as he tried to avoid having to answer.

"I'm sorry," Charlene apologized to Sarah, "I forgot he might not be allowed."

"No-" a flustered Sarah said, "No, of course he can go.  I just need a moment with him before he leaves."

"Sure," Charlene responded with a smile, "I'll be over at the Buy More."

"Chuck," Sarah said speaking quietly, "please keep your watch on you at all times.  If you find yourself in a dangerous situation, you activate the distress call and-"

"Sarah," Chuck whispered as he looked into her eyes, " .thanks.  I promise you, no repeats of what happened with Jill.  I would never disappear from you again." 

"Bartowski!"  Casey's gruff voice made both Sarah and Chuck jump.

Casey held out a plate of appetizers.  "Since you've somehow managed to get yourself in the middle of an important mission, how about you not pass out again huh?"

Chuck blinked in amazement.  "I completely forgot- I've got to tell Morgan that I can't do lunch."

"Thanks Casey," Chuck said taking a bite, "these are pretty good."

The more Chuck ate, the more Casey grinned.  After swallowing the third snack, Chuck looked terror stricken.

"Wait!" He yelled pointing at Casey, "The last time you had appetizers, you laced them with microbots!"

Casey's laugh confirmed his suspicions.

"Don't worry Bartowski," he teased, "they're small.  It's not like you'll feel 'em swimming around in your stomach or anything." 

Casey took a step closer and slapped Chuck on the back.  "Now go have fun on your little field trip."

"Oh God. " Chuck nervously repeated as he made his way up the stairs.

Sarah glared at Casey.  "Was that really necessary?"

"Relax Walker.  Beckman may trust her, but just in case our friendly co-worker turns out to be 'not so friendly' after all, we'll have another way to track Bartowski.  Not even the moron can mess this one up."

"Of course," Casey continued goading Sarah, "those microbots do track with a better resolution than his watch."

"Why I bet when the two of them get to her place, we'll be able to pull up the floorplans and observe just how long they spend in each room."

Casey laughed at Sarah's discomfort.

"How much do you trust your 'nerd-friend' now?" he said leaving the room.
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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #10 on: March 20, 2009, 08:18:17 PM »
Here's how I picture Casey and his CIA co-worker trying to work peacefully side-by-side at the Buy More.  :D

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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #11 on: March 21, 2009, 07:56:01 AM »
This links in really nicely with your other stories posted on here. I can't wait for Chuck to find out Skip is a spy too. Should be fun as Skip seems a pretty quiet guy like Casey, just with silence instead of grunts.

Have to say I feel like there should be more of a hook or something at the end of this chapter though. The first 2 really made me want to read the next chapter now, whereas this one I felt like I could go make and eat lunch before reading the next one ;)
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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #12 on: March 21, 2009, 01:13:01 PM »
Keep 'em comin dz!

This is gettin good.

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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #13 on: March 21, 2009, 04:30:40 PM »
Great part, I'm eagerly waiting for the next one.
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Re: Chuck vs The One That Almost Got Away
« Reply #14 on: March 22, 2009, 09:10:06 PM »
Thanks all, glad you're enjoying the story so far.  Dwarf, I've always felt lunch is an important part of the day.   ;D

The next (and last) three parts are taking a little while longer but will hopefully be worth the wait.  They contain the primary reasons I wanted to tell the story, and I'm being particular by not wanting to omit anything.   ;)
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