MidSeason Melodrama – Episode 3.07: Chuck Vs The Mask – Part II

Part II

Note: the moments in question may reside in this episode but that is a matter of circumstance. There are preceding story telling decisions that led up to this point. It is not an issue that can be analyzed in isolation.


Chuck: ‘Sarah and I have a very unique relationship.’

Indeed they do. Relationships are what drive this show. Not just Chuck and Sarah but all of them. More precisely it is the characters. This is the crux of the matter about the unhappiness being expressed by what transpired during the last 8 mins or so of the show. It is not about  WHAT of the show. It is the HOW.

When a piece of creative work is put forth to be experienced by an audience there is an unspoken bond taking place between the two parties. The creators are offering a story telling experience via the use of dramatic tokens. In turn for these tokens the audience gives the creator their willing suspension of belief. The creator sets up the premise of the show and within the first half dozen episodes build up an array of dramatic tokens for the audience to use to suspend that belief.

These creative tokens come in various forms via characters, plotting, show mythology, story telling logic, internal consistency, etc. Those tokens create ‘buy in’ for the audience. They know from episode to episode the show will be worth investing in because the tokens will be be in play. The more dramatically and empathically these tokens are woven into each episode the more engrossed the audience becomes. Synergistically so does their suspension of disbelief. The better the creators can get the audience to suspend their disbelief the stronger the audience’s involvement becomes. There is a symbiotic relationship going on between the two parties.

The amount of initial suspension of disbelief is dependent on the type of show. Obviously shows grounded in the reality of our world require less suspension. Comedies and shows with fantastical elements require a greater suspension of disbelief. The creators of such shows must compensate for this by offering up bigger storylines, bigger characters, bigger action and so on.

While Chuck may take place in a real world setting, it is one rife with fantastical elements. The show’s basic premise, that a computer database can be downloaded into a person’s brain, allowing them to access information, and now physical abilities, is a big step for the viewer to take. In turn the show offers a mix of entertainment that includes comedy, action, drama, pop culture/nerd references, romance, music, wish fulfillment, spy world vs real life conflicts, and characters.

Out of all of these tokens the show offers, the bedrock one is the characters. Chuck is blessed with an awesome cast and the chemistry between the two leads is captivating. This has turned out to be both blessing and curse. Double-edged sword as it has been referred to elsewhere. For the character/romance token has become so powerful and so dominant that the other tokens pale in comparison.

What it has allowed the show to do is skate around most tokens with a greater degree of freedom. The tokens of story logic, internal consistency, and story mythology are not scrutinized to the same degree we would with other shows because the entertainment payoff is well worth it. We get some great laughs, action, music, spy intrigue, romance, wish fulfillment, and character interaction because of the cross genre show pedigree.

But the caveat is all of our suspension of disbelief hinges on the characters and, by extension, the Chuck and Sarah romance. They are the realest things in the show. They are the anchor for the viewer’s suspension of disbelief. The moment the show wavers on that token then everything else built around it comes crashing down like a house of cards.

The show has set up the dynamics of a, ‘Will they, won’t they?’ tension that has been carried over the 3 seasons of the show. The longer that tension is maintained the more mass it acquires. The more mass it requires the bigger the elephant it becomes in the room. I liken it to a dramatic ball of inertia, or DB for short.

The longer the show runs with this DB, the more history and emotional investment by the viewers it acquires. So it becomes more and more of a complex story telling exercise that the writers must address if they want to bring in other romantic parties to the mix. The days of having a guest star show up for 1 or 2 episodes and strike up a romantic relationship with Chuck or Sarah are long past.

Now it requires several episodes to set up a storyline that can overcome the inertia that the DB has accumulated. It is not just an operation of injecting the new characters into the storyline. That is the easier part of the equation. The more difficult part is positioning the two leads where the new characters can be integrated into their lives in a manner that is not contrived. To add to the difficulty, all this must be done in a manner that the viewers will find plausible and dramatically interesting.

Switching Things Up Is Getting More & More Complicated
Switching Things Up Is Getting More & More Complicated

Extremely vital is the storyline being told, must be told honestly. This means that story points, character traits, etc established previously must be adhered to going forward. With Chuck this comes down to being true to the characters. A difficult one to maintain too as character evaluation is subjective and varies from individual to individual. We may agree on the broad strokes but beyond that there are many interpretations on the finer points.

When it was announced that the third season PLIs were going to be around for 4 and 8 episodes it appeared that the story requirements would be addressed. However as we have seen that has not been done entirely successfully. Of the two, the Chuck and Hannah one has been the more successful. Hannah has been in consecutive episodes and it can be seen that her character is a perfect match for Chuck. Though in 3.06 little was done to advance her arc with Chuck.

(Total aside here – I find it hard to believe that Chuck would be interested in striking up a new relationship given his focus on becoming a spy. He, more than anyone, is aware of the danger he is putting Hannah’s life in by mixing civilian and spy worlds together. This is one of those out of character issues that arise based on previous character history. To date the show has given me little to remove this objection.)

Matching Chuck up is easier than it is for Sarah because of the fundamental nature of the characters. Chuck is open emotionally and provides many doorways to new relationships. Sarah is the opposite and hence requires a lot more story finesse to do so. So when Shaw is MIA in episode 3.06, any momentum built up between him and Sarah is lost. This was a tactical error.

Shaw’s absence places the Shaw/Sarah storyline in a difficult spot. Sarah may have expressed concerns over Chuck turning into a spy in 3.06 but, again, nowhere enough story time is allocated on this point to make the necessary dent in the DB. Especially when Shaw does return in 3.07 and Sarah spurns him for three quarters of the episode. This makes telling the story honestly no longer possible if the goal is to initiate these new pairings by the end of the episode.. What happens then is a rush to move the characters to a targeted position. An exercise in artificiality. In this rush corners have to be cut. This means corners that involve story logic concessions and the use of out of character behavior.

This is the overhead the show must carry when it decides to sustain the, ‘Will they, won’t they?’ dynamic over time. If the Chuck showrunners want to use that device then they must be willing to pay that price. A price that has to be based on honest story telling instead of rushed story telling.

Rushed story telling is what happened in the last 8 minutes of 3.07. That is the HOW that is the issue.

Rushed story telling takes away the capacity for true storytelling and diminishes the most critical dramatic token the show has to offer; that of the characters. That is why the reaction is the one that resulted from fans.

It is not about telling the showrunners what to do.

It is not about objecting to injecting new PLIs into the storyline.

It is about whatever the show does, it does so by being true to the story telling and the dramatic tokens it gave us.

It is about the implicit bond of trust between creator and audience.

A speedbump was encountered on the third season journey. We saw it, we hit it, and we have gone passed it. It was a bump. Not a supernova. Let’s look forward instead of back, shall we? Because the road ahead is oh so, very inviting!

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  1. Lou,

    THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    If you have any contact with Chris or Josh tell them nicely that this was the reason dor the uproar, not the actual trapezoid.

  2. Lou,

    Excellent article. You have certainly hit on the issue I believe most of us are frustrated by, “The How”. The show has done this before, most notably with the quick resolution of the Mauser shooting in S2, but this is a much bigger speed bump because of the DB as you term it.

    I hope TPTB read this, or Mo Ryan’s blog, and understand the true issue with the episode, and do not simply attribute this to a vocal minority that are upset with the development of the relationship and are threatening to boycott the show.

  3. An intelligent, well-written response to the episode and the fan reaction (hmm… reminds me of Topher’s term of “man-reaction” in Dollhouse… anyway, back to the point). It’s a good analysis of the actual reason why many fans freaked out, and the mistake the writers made in presenting chemistry between Sarah and Shaw. As you pointed out, Chuck is the focus of every episode, so any romance he’s in is going to be in the forefront and have time to develop. Shaw and Sarah, on the other hand, seemed kind of forced (and unlike Sarah to develop feelings so quickly – especially considering how long she resisted Chuck).

    That said, I’m pretty sure considerations for Hannah’s safety were not in the forefront when he started to become romantically involved with her. As we’ve seen, Chuck’s not the best at handling romance, and keeping it separate from his life as a spy.

    • I agree brilliantly writen response Lou,very well put.with that said i think there are changes accuring in Chuck that may not be so visable.when it comes to Hannah’s safty i think that Chuck is not even considering that fact in his attemts to be with her.its more like he is trying to get even with Sarah for being intrested in shaw.while at the same time Sarah is trying to rebound because Chuck turned her down in Prauge.

      It is completly out of character for both Sarah and Chuck but thats whats happening at the moment.i also completly agree with Lou that the last 7-10 minutes were rushed and seemed forced.the HOW it happened was probably what put fans in revolt mode as stated earlier by Lou but we all need to calm down take long deep breaths and wait after the olympics are done.then come back with a clear head and renewed patients and enjoy the rest of the season.

      i for one cant wait,once again Lou exellent job with thisa piece.

  4. From some of the spoiler scenes (Sarah Kissing Shaw) in EP 3.8 March 1. I forsee more viewers being pinchy faced before the furor is over. Good article Lou.

  5. Great article! Thanks again!

    Could someone answer one query of mine? How does Hannah not ask any questions about her near death experience or about the presence of Sarah in the last museum scene? NO cover story whatsoever!? Does she know that Chuck is a spy?

    For me, that was a particularly annoying plot hole. I hope it is covered in later episodes. Chuck and Sarah’s relationship does not bother me. It is the PLOT HOLES! Will keep watching all the way nonetheless. Boycott=Stupid.
    What does everyone else think?

    • I agree that was a plot hole I found myself stuck in how is she not asking about almost dying and then the whole sarah/shaw being in the same area just saying who wouldn’t ask questions about things like that but then again maybe she was just happy that the guy she followed all the way to california was the one that saved her from suffocating still overall happy with the episode

      • Yeah, I get what you mean memphizmike. Just feels dangerous leaving such things up to speculation of the audience.

        Thing is, the writers could have sorted it out sufficiently with a couple of lines. For example, get some CIA agent to mock up a lie/reason about Hannah getting trapped (or even Chuck/Casey for that matter). Then, stick in a line somewhere about letting the bad guy escape. Covered! I guess this is why the episode felt so rushed right at the end. Too much crammed into one 40 minute slot, most probably due to budget.

        Nonetheless, I am liking the development. Not ecstatic but happy enough. Btw, thanks for replying! 🙂

  6. The amazing thing here is that Schwartz, when taken to task over this mess, has the temerity to blame the audience for responding in a way that they could not have otherwise done. From the pilot episode, we are introduced to characters designed to be liked, to be bonded with by viewers. We become emotionally invested, as intended. Then comes the 3×7 “Mask” fiasco, where everyone suddenly goes against character, and it feels sordid. It feels like a betrayal. In Schwart’s defence, he is right when he says he could not have foreseen this episode leading into the Olympics hiatus, as these were filmed with a view toward opening after the olympics, then moved up to January after it was too late. The wait for some resolution turns out to be a few weeks instead of one. Schwartz, however, seems to feign indignation that the central “heart-of-the-show” relationship should be so important to viewers, and seems disingenuous by trying to sell the Chuck-Sarah storyline as “just one part” of the show. He knows quite well that the fan base places greater value on this facet of the show than, say, the Buy-More antics or the Devon-Ellie relationship. The show with a good heart has taken a sorry turn.

  7. Lou,
    Spot On! Personally, I wouldn’t have mind Chuck and Sarah exploring other LIs, as least for their characters to grow further I guess. It is, truth be told, a GREAT show, not only with the Chuck/Sarah thing but the action, the comedy, and THE CAST…truly incredible. However, arguably, the Chuck/Sarah romance is one of the pivotal parts of the show and obviously has touched the heartstrings of lots of viewers. Integrating new LIs, is a very touchy issue in itself for some viewers, and the way it was done during the last 8 mins. , even for a non-shipper as myself, was rushed and callous. It seemed totally out of character, especially for Sarah. My initial thought was “Wow, Casey was right…she really does fall ALL the guys she works with, Bryce, Chuck and now Shaw?” Well, the show creators and writers are human after all, so I hope they get some insight from Ep7. For the sake of the show, I hope the next episodes have better storytelling. Nevertheless, its still a great show with a great cast, lets continue to watch it and invite others to watch, Go Chuck!

    • I cannot believe how many people are trying to be so PC about Chuck and Sarah and their LI’s, so they are not seen as “crazy” shippers. I find it very hard to believe that ANYONE who watched and loved the first 2 seasons of Chuck had the following thought… I AM GOING TO HOPE FOR A THIRD SEASON SO THAT I CAN
      SEE CHUCK AND SARAH HAVE SEX WITH NEW AND INTERESTING PEOPLE!
      I hope a lot of different people love this show for alot of different reasons
      (I personally can’t get enough of Jeff and Lester) and that is why the fan base is so rabid and full of fighters. However, if can watch this show for any length of time and not be Team Charah, then I am afraid you are the “crazy” one!

  8. A very rational, well-thought out article, Lou. Thank you. I have another episode flash for you: Sarah’s face lighting up when Chuck calls her his partner. We haven’t seen many smiles from Sarah this season.

    I think part of the problem with the story-telling in this episode is that the writers are without a very powerful device used in the first two seasons: Chuck’s mouth. The audience knows what Chuck is thinking and feeling because he tells us (via his conversations with Sarah). However, Chuck isn’t having those conversations with Sarah this season, so we don’t really know what’s in Chuck’s head.

    Likewise, the audience is clued in to what Sarah is thinking based on her reactions to what Chuck says to her. Chuck isn’t saying much of anything to her, thus Sarah can’t react. Sarah doesn’t react, thus the audience has no idea what she’s thinking. I think if we had a better idea of what was going in the characters’ minds, we’d understand why things happened the way they did in this episode. Perhaps this will all be explained quite clearly in future episodes.

  9. Awesome review I hope many people read it to gain some perspective of this whole thing.

  10. interesting and well written review.

    what i was thinking was that maybe there will be a back story in future episode as to why sarah has to jump into a relationship with shaw so quickly. perhaps there was something going on when shaw went on a mission alone on 3.06 and beckman told sarah to keep a close eye on shaw… and when shaw show an interest, she took it as an opportunity and play along. and for this reason i did not pull out my garbage bin and start chucking my chuck related stuff in it.

    im trying to stay positive. chuck’s writers are smart, thoughtful and creative writers so i have faith in everything they do. they haven’t failed us in the past, and i don’t think they’ll start failing on us now.

    as to chuck/hannah relationship, i like that they’re together; it makes a good story stretcher. and although i would like for K.K to stay longer, im interested to know how they wrote her out in the next episode.

  11. OD, great article. I have to say you have summed up how we fans feel about HOW the way things are being done. I’m not giving up on Chuck, but I sure would like to enjoy the ride more. There is more than meets the eye (like a transformer-sorry, couldn’t resist) with this storyline and that is what I have to believe to let me swallow such out of character actions. Cheers to getting through the low spot of the season and hoping things only go up from here!

  12. Very good analytical articles, both of them. Interesting to read and probably
    correct in a technical sense. Insofar are the showrunners are concerned, this
    is a good defense, absolutely superb. A lawyer couldn’t have made a better
    case, congrats. You ought to send Schwartz and Fedak a bill for the time you
    put in writing this. They owe you, they really do.

    You will probably have to write another article for episode 3.8. I have read
    supposedly Sarah kisses Shaw in this episode. Well, if true, nothing like
    throwing gasoline on a raging forest fire with the ratings slowly but surely
    slipping downward. But then again the showrunners know what they’re doing,
    right? The audience should have a little faith, right? After the fans save the
    show and endured all of those months of waiting, THIS is what they get for
    watching 7 episodes of Season 3, a reprise of the first 2 seasons with Shaw
    subbed for Bryce and Hannah for Jill. But the audience shouldn’t dictate to
    the showrunners, right? Well you are right, the audience shouldn’t but their
    input these last months should not have been totally ignored either, not
    withstanding the claims of Schwatz and Fedak in their panic interview that
    they read the comments of the fans and take them seriously. If that really
    was true, they wouldn’t be in the mess they’re in now.

    The producers have done what they have liked and now they are going to have to like what they have done. The sad thing about this is that it’s probably
    not fixable. Most of the episodes have already been shot and the showrunners
    are going to have to go with what they have, for better or for worse. At this
    time it looks like for worse, as I previously mentioned, the ratings seem to
    be taking a long, slow swan dive as the audience reacts to the product being
    offered. Seems like the bonds of trust you talk about are in fact being broken, not by the audience, but by the showrunners.

    Well now we have a 2 week break which is probably a good idea allowing for
    tempers to cool, people to chill out, and reevaluate. We have to remember
    this is TV show about fictional characters, not life and death, so let’s not take this too seriously. In the end when the smoke clears and the shouting is
    over, the audience will decide the fate of the series, not the showrunners,
    who maybe should have considered the customers’ wants more tha what they did,
    but it’s too late to worry about that now.

    That’s all for now, thanks.

    • Did you misunderstand my article? My position is the showrunners made a mistake. I don’t know how you see how I defended them. The opposite is true.

      • Interesting, but unfortunately, I believe that the showrunners did not make a mistake with the timing of the new love triangles. I tend to agree with Josh Schwartz and Chris Fedak’s comments from that telephone conference with Alan Sepinwall. Personally, I didn’t think it was rushed storytelling at all because as Josh Schwartz said, Sarah was still in a painful emotional state because she opened up to Chuck and got stomped on. That’s how I see Shaw fitting in: he’s emotionless so Sarah won’t have to open up emotionally. I think that’s why that MSN spoiler for 3.08 stated Sarah tries to keep things professional with Shaw; I believe Sarah wants to keep things physical and unemotional, but is having trouble because after Chuck, she wants someone she can confide with emotionally, but as I believe we will see, Shaw will not be able to do so.

        In fact, the rushing into the new love interests works great for me because I don’t really enjoy the angst, so the less screen time on romance works good for me.

        In conclusion, I think some people think the execution was rushed because they enjoy good drama, while others don’t because they prefer action/comedy. So I think the showrunners did the best they could to balance these 2 opposing desires.

      • We will have to agree to disagree.

        I read that transcript as well and while JS & CF listed off their reasons – those reasons did not make it onto the screen adequately.

        Hence the disconnect.

      • i’m with you lou, sarah is quite attractive, if she was looking for an emotionless fling as she is on a rebound she could have done that with anyone (met a guy in the yoghurt shop, in a bar, on the street). you must assume that someone as beautiful as her must get asked out a lot why would she choose to ruin her relationship with her boss by getting into a “emotionless” relationship, its just plain tacky writing if you ask me.

        Lou i believe your article is spot on. you expressed my thoughts on episode 7 eloquently thank you for writing this i’m going to share the links for this article on the nbc boards

      • i’m with you on this lou, sarah is quite attractive, if she was looking for an emotionless fling as she is on a rebound she could have done that with anyone (met a guy in the yoghurt shop, in a bar, on the street). you must assume that someone as beautiful as her must get asked out a lot why would she choose to ruin her relationship with her boss by getting into a “emotionless” relationship, its just plain tacky if you ask me.

        Lou i believe your article is spot on. you expressed my thoughts on episode 7 eloquently thank you for writing this i’m going to share the links for this article on the nbc boards

      • Angela_Loves_Spaghetti

        u shouldn’t use that user name u hypocrite.

      • I may have miss understood Robert H, but I don’t think he thought you were defending JS/CF.

        I got the impression that Robert H was more addressing the phone interview between Schwartz/Fredak and the blog writer. In that interview, both of them, when boiled down to it essence, believe all the negative reaction is just from a hand full of “shipper” and they, JS/CF know exactly what they are doing, and would tell the show exactly the same way, that it was perfect the first time out.

  13. I have to agree, the last two episodes have been a big disappointment. I think that Sarah’s reputation as a spy was carefully crafted over the first two seasons. Now, however, she really does fall (to varying degrees) for every guy she works with, not just Bryce, Chuck and Shaw, but I also recall a kiss with Beefcake. Her credibility as a great spy has been destroyed.

    Casey shouldn’t have had to mute the mics to hide Chuck & Sarah’s bickering from Shaw, because they should know he is listening. In addition to many comments other’s have made, this is just another example of lazy writing. Whatever happened to heartfelt two minute conversations between so many characters, not just Chuck & Sarah. It’s the missing ingredient that made the show so appealing.

    Thanks,
    losing the faith.

    • She’s an awesome spy. One of the best. What are you talking about? She combines her hand-to-hand combat skills with her awesome looks and ability to charm. Great tools.

      She hasn’t necessarily fallen for Shaw. Aren’t you paying attention. She’s playing up to him. Except for 8 minutes or so, she’s been pretty much repulsed by him.

      She was attracted to Cole, but ultimately sent him packing and chose Chuck (of course he didn’t see it). She’s worked with Casey. They haven’t done anything.

      She may or may not have lost some credibility, but not as a competent agent.

    • what do you mean the last two episodes were disappointments they were great and sarah does not fall for every spy she works with bryce took years to develop cole was just a fling and remember her and casey are just partners she is still recovering from this thing with chuck she knows how he feels about her she feels the same about him but she is also dealing with the fact that she is partly responsible for chuck becoming the spy that he is because she was the main one telling him that he had the skills to be the perfect spy now she is regreting it a little bit because that means that she is losing the chuck that she grew to love her skills as a spy have not been hampered by her falling out with chuck she just needs time to adjust to expressing herself to others

    • I’m sorry to stray a bit from the topic of “The Mask” but I would like to present a different view of Sarah and Coe Barker. I know it seemed that Sarah had a possible romantic interest in Coe but I believe she NEVER was really interested in him at all.
      I believe her looking up Coe’s personal file was just her finding out more about him professionally.
      When it appeared she was admiring how and what Coe was doing while he was being tortured, I think it was more to do with Coe trying to protect Chuck’s ID as the Intersect.
      Before she helped Coe after being rescued by Casey, she was glancing over to see how Chuck was doing.
      The kiss she had with Coe had to do more with her saying his kiss at the hotel wasn’t that good and he responded by saying it was essentially not his real kiss. So she tested it and found it still not that good so she pulled away.
      In the next episode (The Lethal Weapon), she was very comfortable sharing a room with Chuck. So much so that she even made a funny comment that it could have been worse, he could have roomed with Casey.
      I believe the writers are very adept at misdirecting the viewers and I believe that is what they did with Sarah and Coe and what they are now doing with Sarah and Shaw.

  14. Great post. There is a “contract” of sorts between a show and its fan base. And you explained that very well. Perhaps if Sarah had shown just a bit of interest in Shaw earlier in the episode and didn’t push back so clearly we–as an audience–wouldn’t have gotten “whiplash” during the last few minutes…and forgiven the trapazoid (or whatever it is) trajectory. Maybe the final script pages came after the first 2/3rds were shot? It was just so odd and soured an otherwise cool episode.

  15. I twitted this to JS. Hope he reads it.

    Well said.

  16. Aces Lou, aces. I couldn’t have even come close to saying it as well myself.

  17. Lou-

    As always, I really liked your review. I just had two counter points as some food for thought:

    1- I do think some of Sarah’s rebukes of Shaw were over exaggerated to the point that I actually thought that she might have been enjoying them- or as Roan would put it “the lady doth protest too much”. If seen in this light, he turn around to Shaw is a little easier to believe.

    2- At the end of vs. The Mask, I think Sarah telling Chuck she does have a type and insinuating that there was something between her and Shaw was more about her trying to make it easier for Chuck to move on, esp. personally with Hannah. When she says “Bye Chuck” and he turns to walk away, the pain of loss on her face is palpable. This is truly one of those scenes that requires very little words, but conveys SO MUCH MORE. To me, she might have just as well have said “I love you” because that is clearly where her heart is.

    • You do know, although Chuck (the character) didn’t catch it, that “Well, I have my type” was about Chuck, not Shaw. It was in answer to he’s your hero.

    • On the flip side, Chuck was obviously pained during that entire conversation. He put his heart on the line one more time in that scene when he asked Sarah whether she was OK with the Hannah thing. I think it was fairly apparent that he was hoping she would grow a set of ovaries and say no. She decided to be supportive of a relationship with Hannah when what he was looking for was some sort of sign he still had a chance with her. She kept that smile pasted on her face until he turned around.

      • To be fair, Sarah also stated that she was only going to stand in Chuck’s way, and not only professionally. His response? Right” Both characters “blew it.”

    • Re: Pt.2 I am so, so glad somebody else out there noticed this. The expression on her face was so poignant, so beautiful. It spoke volumes to me. I was, frankly, shocked at the ‘general’ reaction to this episode. Those infamous last ‘ten minutes’ were the shippiest thing I’d seen in a while! lol.

      My $1.29 : For some reason, I don’t mind Chuck gettin’ a little make out time with cutie whatserhoozle. At the end of the day, I love him because.. he’s just a guy. A Good Guy, hell.. a *Great* Guy, but in the end, he could be anybody. He’s the most ‘human’ character on TV, IMO. Good guys should get to feel nice once in a while. Plus, wow.. she was coming on *strong*. That neck tie might as well have been a big’ol shiny bow, because she was signed sealed and -delivered-. Altruistic ideals aside, who’s saying no to that?? Chuck knows he’s not ready to be with Sarah, and vice versa. He should be able to enjoy a little R&R.

      Shaw, on the other hand, puts my nape hairs up. Sure he’s all floppy hair and cow eyes now, running around saving the damsel..but there’s a hardness within. He strikes me as a “My way or the Highway” kinda dude, and I don’t know if “his way” is a parallel path with Chuck and Sarah. Coles Notes version: I think he’s evil/damaged & therefore, Bad News. 🙂

      Overall I thought it was a great episode.. and exactly why I watch the show. The fact that the creators had to give an explanatory interview to calm the masses is appalling. It seemed like nobody understood what they did. Well, I got it. I’m sure a few others did, too.

      It’s going to be a loooong Olympics. 🙂 GO CANADA!

  18. Excellent article. Well said, and I couldn’t have said it any better. Heck, I couldn’t have even said that. 🙂 I’m sticking it out as the “unforgivable” deed has not been done, and I’m looking forward to the rest of the season. Buy yourself a beer on me. 😛

  19. Thank you. It really is this simple. It’s a shame the fans became the target and the real issue was not addressed.

  20. Well Said! Absolutely outstanding analysis.

  21. Excellent article Lou! Captured perfectly the essence of why this episode has been received the way it has by the fan base.

  22. This really was an absolutely great article! This and the Chuck You Tuesday podcast really cover it well. I do believe the “how” is what has most of the fan base upset. It has been annoying that most of the critics are responding to a few people complaining about the “what” and threatening boycotting the show versus acknowledging this issue

    I had actually been looking forward to a Sarah LI that lasted more than 30secs in an episode, but I’m finding it hard to believe Shaw/Sarah & not for just the quick 180 she committed in the episode (though I felt that was HUGE). I’m have a hard time believing in Shaw/Sarah because of the lack of chemistry between Brandon & Yvonne. Maybe its because Zac & Yvonne have SO much onscreen chemistry that its hard for any actor to fill those shoes. IMO, Brandon isn’t believably emoting any kind of real emotion from his character towards Sarah. Perhaps this is because it’s rushed so much in this episode (& since Shaw arrived), but the whole thing just feels utterly hollow for me. I hate that they felt that Sarah’s LI had to be parallel to Chuck’s. I can believe a Chuck LI far sooner than I can believe 1 for Sarah. It just made the last 10-15mins of “the Mask” that much worse

  23. What bothered me about this episode was the sexual harassment vibe from this PLI. Shaw is Sarah’s superior and he is being unprofessional and trying to hit on her. What is worse is that later Sarah “seems” to be into it. Gah! I know it is only a show and not “reality” but this bothered me and sort of creeped me out. Casey even grunted. Go Casey.

  24. I realize this is a Chuck fansite and I’m a Chuck fan, but I have to disagree with this analysis. You can’t really criticize the show on a site called Chucktv.net can you? This episode failed on a number of levels, but the greatest failure was the breach of trust between the show runners and the audience–an audience that helped save Chuck from cancellation and deserved a bit more respect and intelligent thoughtful storytelling. All the defenders of the episode link the NPR article which is one heck of an arrogant condescending article in my opinion–that says the fans don’t get to have ownership interest. Very true. But they can speak out when displeased and a good many have. Nothing wrong with that. They wanted us to invest in C/S, we did, and they turned them on their heads. It was absolutely not necessary to play it that way–tons and tons of ways to keep the sexual tension going on a bit longer other than then what was chosen. It was fast, it made both C/S less appealing, less honorable, it made no sense, and wasn’t executed well at all–writing, directing. Everyone can have a bad day and they did, but JS has made it clear he wouldn’t do anything differently so I have to assume he’s fine with the fan reaction. I think the anger and disappointment has been so great, not because the fans are all irrational, but because those of us who love this show have really LOVED it. I’ve never come away from a Chuck episode with a feeling other than what a cool fun show and to actually want to throw my remote at the TV was saying something. Unfortunately for many it’s not so easy to just move on after the bump in the road as you call it–you can’t bring C/S back around to where they were that easily. Which is really too bad because the season started so strong. No doubt they will once again do their dance, but it won’t be nearly as much fun for many of us.

    • The people at NPR show condescending and arrogant tendencies?

      I never knew that.

      I suppose you also think that the surface of the sun is a hot place.

  25. Sorry–let me clarify–I wasn’t saying “you” couldn’t criticize, as in you wouldn’t dare, I meant it like “are we allowed to criticize” on this site. 🙂 I think you did take exception with the execution as well, I only disagreed with the speed bump portion. It felt more like a sinkhole.

  26. After re-watching it, it seems pretty clear to me that Sarah/Shaw is fake, at least on her end, and also somewhat likely on his end and I’m pretty sure we’ll see that develop soon. I wouldn’t be surprised if Shaw/Hannah were some kind of combo set to see if Chuck/Sarah can work professionally or some such. If you look at it that way, which is how I do until we see the next ep or two, then it’s not really out of character. If Shaw/Sarah is “real”, then it obviously makes absolutely no sense from either character’s perspective and I’d feel let down by the writers who’ve so far told a very good story. But to me it seems like they’re somewhat likely just gaming each other. I mean come on that “yeah when you were kissing my neck it was kinda nice” speech smells more like BS than Iran’s policy of “civil” nuclear enrichment.

    What annoyed me more were the tons of plot holes like having a fire suppression system activated by a floor sensor instead of, you know, fire? Or the fact that the whole mission could be prevented by showing up with a search warrant for a lethal weapon? Or that Ellie snap-drops the Chuck investigation (maybe she didn’t and is just taken aback for a sec, we don’t know that for sure)?

    The only one that seemed out of character to me was Chuck at some points with respect to getting with Hannah, but look at how hot she is; he thinks he can’t really know if he’ll ever be able to get with Sarah, and he hasn’t gotten any besides Jill since, well, ever.

  27. hey….in one of my comment on a prior post, I was really hard on “Brandon Routh”. I was trying to express my anger on Shaw’s character, so i lose my comment before it’s to late. anyway it’s alright coz somebody in the main-line read what a fan of “chuck t.v series” felt after watching epi 3.07…..To be bit clear, i’m a strong fan of chuck series, im so addicted to it…..even thou it’s a t.v show, I get this as something happening in real life…..Fist of all i want to thank Chrish & Josh for the great show, which is a perfect AND a unique entertainment…….But here in this comment i want to show as to why fans are so upset and revolting after watching epic3.07….

    “When a mistake is point out it’s the quality of a Gentlemen to accept it in the Good Spirit”.

    *first i wanna say normally when you say a CIA agent, you are taking about sought of a unique creature or some super human being coz “spies” go undercover to collect foreign intelligence. .” generally well-educated, know other languages, like to work with people from all over the world and can adapt to any situation, including dangerous ones. Most people, including their FRIENDS AND FAMILY MEMBERS, will never know exactly what CIA AGENTS do.

    “SO IN CHUCK T.V SERIES WHAT WE SEE IS A CIA AGENT FALL IN LOU WITH AN ORDINARY HUMAN BEING, BUT SHE’S UNABLE TO EXPRESS THAT COZ OF CERTAIN ISSUES”…..THIS IS A UNIQUE THING IN THE SPY WORLD, SO WE FANS WANNA SEE HOW THIS RELATIONSHIP WORKS”……Yvonne says in an interview the reason why she falls for SHAW, coz there is something special about HIM……..so I wanna say to Josh, Chrish and the writters we FANS watch “chuck” because there is something special about this show and specially “THE RELATIONSHIP” BTWN CHUCK/SARAH…..CHRISH & JOSH Said chuck/sarah relationship is the heart of the show….just a hint, “WHEN THE HEART STOPS THE WHOLE SYSTEM STOPS”.

    *THE MISTAKE OF THE CHUCK TEAM & EXCUSE BEHALF OF THE FANS:

    *1ST MISTAKE
    up to now we have watch 40+ episodes in chuck, we loved every epi till 3.07…the mistake that the chuck team did was an unexpected RELATIONSHIP was bonded within a matter of ten min……………the excuse that fans give saying that we are “betrayed” coz we are “NOT SPIES”…..SPIES ARE EMOTIONLESS/but we chuck fans are emotional and pain sensors do function properly……..i suppose this is the reason why there was a MASSIVE DROP IN THE RATINGS.

    *THE SECOND MISTAKE THE WRITERS DID:
    Sarah clearly knows the reason why chuck wanna be a spy….and how much chuck cares about her, and all the dedications that chuck has done within last two years or so…..so after all if Sarah has guts to say”I HAVE MY TYPE” AND “I’M NOT GONNA STAND IN YOUR WAY ONLY PROFESSIONALLY”…..CUM ON writers wake up, u’ll just blew the whole scenario, by those two comments by SARAH WALKER you”ll have just blown that character, and have given the fans a negative impression about her, that we find difficult to forgive…….when Sarah dumped my favorite chuck like that, as a fan i was so annoyed, its was like indirectly telling”AM SO SORRY, BUT I DON’T LIKE YOU”……AS A FAN I HAVE NO IDEA HOW THE CHUCK TEAM GONNA BRING THESE TWO C/S TOGETHER , …AFTER A LAME STORYLINE LIKE THAT…anyway we know chuck he’s an innocent guy, probbably he could forgive Sarah for HURTING him like that……..

    Hint: We loved sarah from epi one because of her caring nature, am so sad to say who ever the person who wrote epic 3.07, is like trying to take some personal revenge,through this character.At the end of the day what i can say is that, we love Sarah for 40+ epic…..but WITHIN 10 MIN she dumped not only chuck but all her fans……..”A DROP OF POISON ON A PURE MILK WILL 100% SPOIL THE WHOLE GLASS OF MILK”…….

    • Not all of us have liked every episode up to 3.07. Some of us have questioned the way in which the “reset” was done. I acknowledge a reset was probably needed, but I didn’t like the way TPTB went about it. Personally, the only episodes I’ve liked from this season are Angel of Death & Op. Awesome (just overall “fun” eps.) & Nacho (for the Chuck personal/professional growth)

  28. Maybe I’m naive, but the more I think about what happened, the show’s norm for approaching the spy trade and all that we’ve learned a out these characters, I think the abrupt and odd ending was because the characters were meant to look uncomfortable and pained. I think Sarah is employing her skills as a spy and getting close to Shaw to see what’s going on. I don’t think Chuck is in on the play, but it’s possible that they communicated some plan along the way and we did not see it. The Tron poster is a great example of the writers allowing other things critical to the story to take place beyond the camera. Read in light of this possibility, JS and CF’s comments are not nearly as bad and the show actually works. Taken one step further, the pained Sarah neck rub scene looks more ominous when you consider that Shaw’s expression is almost as if he knows what she is up to and is going to play along to play her. Think back to episode 1.2 where Chuck flashes on Sarah killing some people with poison and se says that she was glad she killed them before they killed her. Spying is a dangerous game and survival is about timing. I think we are seeing the start of a
    dance to survive and Sarah is trying to lead, but may be being led.

    • You may be right, but I for one hope they don’t retcon something so central as the primary relationship of the show. Just my opinion….

  29. Very well written Lou!
    I want you to be our one and only Chuck ambassador from now on.

    About your “It is not about WHAT of the show. It is the HOW”.
    To under line you point let us flip the episode plot around to something ALMOST as bad:
    Chuck and Sarah is arguing ¾ of the episode then suddenly turn 180, get friendly and have rough make up sex in the castle.
    This is almost as bad but only almost since Chuck and Sarah has loads of history together. But still this wouldn’t make any sense either.

    At this stage I feel it pointless to speculate if things are fakes or not so I see it the way you do Lou.
    “That rhymed, I didn’t mean that to rhyme”

  30. At least, someone who expressed exactly what i felt. Treating the viewers like “stupid nerds”, by telling that their only wish is to see Chuck and Sarah together, was preposterous.
    This episode clearly lacked of coherence and it’s not a criticism to the writiers or producers of the show to say that. There certainly was some stupid reactions by some (like boycotting f.e.), but i’m hoping that the majority of Chuch’s fans are grown-up people. Liking a tv-show is not incompatible with liking/caring for good and coherent stories.
    It’s not a rebellion, it’s just tough love baby, sign of a (too?) passionate relationship 😉

  31. Great post, Lou. I’ve come to expect no less.

    I’ve felt overwhelmed. There’s been so much written (and read!) over these past 3 days I can’t keep up. And the vast majority of it is well considered, well written and even deep. I’m surprised how little of what I’ve seen is just silly trolling and easily dismissed. Much like the Subway campaign this spring, the reaction is “not what a normal fan would do.”

    But that’s not to say I agree with it. I feel like an absolute minority of one when I realize that I actually liked The Mask, even the last 10 minutes. It’s not that I don’t understand the reactions I’ve seen; it’s that each part of the story carries such elements of inevitability I can’t see how it’s improved by changing any part. It’s an incomplete puzzle, with pieces scattered on the table – some with matching colors connected and some not. Filing down a nub to make it fit doesn’t help, and it feels like many fans want to do just that.

    That’s where that awful word “entitlement” comes in. You defined it well, but others have not – readers get upset when they fill in the unwritten what-it-is-you’re-feeling-entitled-to with something other than the intended. Of course fans are not entitled to write the story themselves (and writing by committee never works anyway). Of course the fans are entitled to speak out, even to the point of complaining. FREE SPEECH!!! No one is entitled to happiness and satisfaction by dint of birth. And of course everyone is entitled to take their ball and go home, or to turn the TV off. In fact, no one can stop them. All this keeps being brought up, but it’s never been in question.

    Yet, I continue to see silver linings. I see them in the story (which makes me want to council “patience!” for the umpteenth time to people who have been patient). I see it in the vehemence of the reactions. People just don’t react like this when they don’t care.

    And man, we care. This can only be a good thing.

    • Joe, bump that up to “a minority of two”. I also liked the episode, even the last 10 minutes. It’s not my absolute favorite and I see where the complaints come from, but I still enjoyed it and am eager to see the rest of the puzzle.

      • Make it three. 😀

        I like the episode too except for the fumble at the end.

      • But was it a fumble, Lou? I think it’s blatantly obvious that Sarah is playing Shaw. They’re probably playing each other. Look at Sarah’s facial expressions. In every scene with Shaw, she looks embarrassed and disinterested. And one thing we know is that Yvonne Strahovski’s strong point is conveying emotion through a look. If she looks embarrassed and disinterested, it’s because she is, and we’re meant to see that. There is zero chemistry there. I’m not a fan of Routh, and I tend to think he looks wooden at the best of times – but Yvonne Starhovski nails her looks to camera every time.
        They called the episode “The Mask”. They gave us a comment from Shaw telling us to watch for body language and chemistry. I’m not sure how much more obvious they could have made it.
        I dislike the episode because it’s not remotely funny – but I can’t believe the furore over the Shaw/Sarah hook up, because it’s transparently not “real”.

    • Add me to the “like Episode”…I am looking at this episode as part 3 of 4 mini-series and the whole hannah Arc.
      recall the writers had not expected the Olympic recess to occur…i am sure they would have liked to use another episode…but in thinking having suck a controversal episode play then 3 weeks off certainly will build momentum for March 1st 🙂
      I love the Hannah character, somewhat mysterious, intelligent and stunning….wish she was signed for more episodes.
      Shaw just seems to be getting in the way. Bryce and Sarah we can understand their relationship; but Shaw ?..there must be an agle here.

  32. Lou,

    Thanks for the articulate take on the strangest 8-9 minutes in I dare the series let alone season 3.

    I couldn’t agree more that is it the HOW that was so bizarre the other night…

    We all knew this was coming given the spoilers and the casting of Routh and KK. Personally, I am enjoying the journey a great deal and love the over arching story being told. Regarding the bond between showrunners and fans, I trust these guys and for the most part have always been impressed with their sense of story telling, concern for mythology, and their continued interest in fan reaction, support, etc….

    I love their sense of humor and clever ways to surprise us regularly with stunts, plotlines, guest stars, etc….

    That said, this odd 8-9 minutes was strangely out of character when compared to the development of Chuck and Sarah and the specific events of season 3, e.g. prague, spy training, importance of family, etc. etc…. So, after reading Schwartz and Fedak’s recent comments on the episode, it maybe the case that we will all sigh a collective “ah ha” in a few weeks when the story spools out…/ I hope that is the case and as one fan will reluctantly wait through through the Olympic break (not soooo patiently) to see how things play out.

    Keep up the wonderful episode reviews Lou, it helps keep us FANS off the edge of the proverbial cliff….LOL.

  33. i know something awesome is coming our way even though i was cursing way too much at the ending of the episode.

  34. WOW! That was epic! I totally agree! A well though out review of what’s happened. Done intelectually, not emotionally. Yet, without totally disregarding the emotion. Well done! I would absolutly love to see similar reviews come out in the future about future episodes.

  35. After checking several times for your review on Tuesday and not finding it, I am glad that you took the time to set out your logical and honest review of the episode. It was definitely worth the wait Lou.

    I truly believe that what we have seen with the fan reaction over this episode is not just a one-time occurrence but rather the future of things to come. In other words the future success of television is going to be more dependent upon the community connection between a show’s fans and the show itself. Clearly Chuck was saved by the fans last spring and summer and its future survival will be be no less dependent upon the continued support of all of us.

    With Twitter, the Internet blogs and web sites like this one (thanks Mel, Liz and Gray) there will continue to be a very dynamic connection between the producers of shows and the fans that support them. While fans shouldn’t control the creative direction of a show, its clear that producers need to do all they can to continue to nurture and encourage that continued support.

    That being said, I do hope that an extended video preview can be uploaded to YouTube soon since the preview after the show on Monday night was missing. The next two weeks will be important to calm everyone’s fears and to pull out all the stops to encourage people to keep on watching.

  36. Well said Cassie and Donovan. I couldn’t agree more. I just wish this was
    fixable. We will have to wait and see. I flatly disagree a reset was necessary, or if necessary could have been done in a way that credibility for
    future episodes would not be harmed. The Charah relationship is what drives the show and nothing else, other characters not withstanding. The cost of the
    “reset” has been the loss of the show’s charm, a price in my opinion, that was
    much to high to pay.

  37. After watching episode seven, I feel compelled to submit my thoughts. I started watching “Chuck” probably a little later than most of the fans, but I have really gotten into it. The writers are outstanding, at least I thought so before the last episode, and the cast is wonderful and really compliment each other. However, I can’t help but comment on the relationship between Chuck and Sarah and how it has deteriorated this season. As you all know, it was developed and nurtured in the first season and progressed into a full-flown love (albeit almost secret) in the second. After watching the seven episodes of the third season, I am really disappointed in the direction the writers are taking Chuck and Sarah’s. characters and their relationship. I hope NBC doesn’t lose sight of the fact that the intense chemistry between them literally brought this series to the third season. From what I can see, the fans don’t want to see Sarah making out with other men, when they know (hope) she really loves Chuck. What’s up with “Superman”? We know that Chuck is in love with Sarah and told her so as recently as a few episodes ago. How then could she in the course of a few minutes pursue a relationship with Shaw? I understand it will get even more intense in the next episode. We all know that Sarah and Chuck can’t totally get-together, like married, or the story-line would be over. However, the love they have for each other should be exposed more in the current season – even if it’s where no one else sees. I read an interview with Sarah and she was asked about the relationship between her and Chuck in season three. She said that there will be big changes between them and she called the changes “Epic”. By the way it’s going; one could assume that her response meant that they will drift even further apart. The very things that made Sarah fall in love with Chuck seem to have been written out of season three. Sarah was drawn to him because he was so vulnerable, naive, honest, and truthful and she could fill a void in him. In season three, however, the writers seem to have elevated Chuck to almost equal status with her as an agent and he seems to not need her anymore to excel as a spy. Finally, the relationship between them in season one and two was electric and the way it was intertwined into the overall story, made the viewers hungry for the next episode. I hardly see them even looking at each other in the current season and their time alone and heartfelt conversations are pretty much non-existent. Oh yes, there were a couple of subtle hints of jealousy, but nothing else. I hope NBC has some of their staff reading the comments on this and other sites. The show is entitled “Chuck”; however, the chemistry between Chuck and Sarah is the glue that will hold this series together.

  38. Good review that covers what a lot of people apparently feel, however I TOTALLY disagree with the idea that the last part of the episode was “rushed”. Taking a look at where things are in terms of the timeline of the story, we are over 6 months removed from the train incident. That is a long time for 2 people to move on. They were seperated for a long time. While it’s obvious they still have feeling for each other, that doesn’t mean they are automatically incapable of falling for someone else. Even before the train station, the reality is that Chuck and Sarah WERE NEVER A REAL COUPLE. The danced around the subject, had a few romantic moments and make out scenes, but never actually got together. They finally admitted their feelings for each other but they never dated and then Chuck broke her heart.

    They were seperated for 6 months, they grew apart. When they saw each other again they played the friend card. At this point, Chuck feels he will never be able to redeem himself in her eyes and does what any other single male in their 20s would do, MOVE ON. He meets his perfect match, Hannah, and falls for her fast. Perfectly logical. Shaw comes on the scene, and Sarah just sees another cocky spy. Then she finds out he was married and his wife dies, this changes her feelings somewhat. Then she still resents his advances, but finally, after seeing Chuck move on, lets her guard down and goes with it. Once again, perfectly logical that she could change her mind fast. It happens in real life all the time. This is dating.

    I understand why some feel things were rushed, but Sarah and Shaw didn’t even kiss. Sarah just stopped shooting down his advances. They aren’t together yet, they just have feelings for each other.

    In the end, everyone will have their own take on the matter, but I beg everyone to not stop watching because of the end of one episode with so much to come.

    On a side not, poor Kristen Kruek, she can’t catch a break lately. Her character gets killed by the fans on Chuck because she messes with C/S love saga. The same thing happened when she came back to Smallville last season for 4 episode arch where she got a ton of fan hate because she messed with the Lois and Clark love sage. Poor girl can’t catch a break.

  39. StefanoTheBigBabyFace

    Something to think about that could help explain the stupidity of some of these third season episodes:

    Comparing the “Chuck Versus the First class” episode with the “Chuck versus the Mask”, one can pretty much deduce that Shaw is playing the role of gaining the teams trust and sending Chuck on absurd missions to accomplish things for him — perhaps as a double agent would. (I couldn’t tell ya)

    In the mask, what was the point of really obtaining a mask that had some poison mechanism in it? Was it a nuclear device? Did the mission contribute to getting closer to the Ring leaders?
    No, it was small potatoes. It DID allow Shaw to gain the trust of Team Bartowski a little bit, to push Sarah closer to him and split Chuck and her apart; but nothing any CIA agent would deem crucial for counter intelligence.

    I won’t comment on the romantic crap because, really, who wants to make themselves nauseous?

    Now, the First class episode. We start with Shaw saying: “This team has been dysfunctional; the other two are holding Chuck back”…
    Was he referring to the last 2 seasons we’ve been watching? This is either a farce, a mentally challenged individual, or a double agent.

    The next very interesting thing is when Chuck first meets Hannah. She actually points Chuck to Stone Cold Steve Austin for his Flash… and then looks at Chuck in shock after he had his seizure-flash…
    So, I believe she was sent by Shaw to meet Chuck and to develop some sort of romantic connection and to likely assist on this mission, such as in pointing out the target for Chuck. But, I don’t think she really knows the details of who Chuck is other than that he’s someone she’s marking for Shaw with the specific purpose of keeping an eye on him and engaging him romantically. I think it’s likely she falls for him somewhat or at least really likes him, despite her being an operative.
    Main goal would clearly be to divide this “dysfunctional” team Bartowski.

    Last strange thing:
    Shaw needs some extra intelligence on the Ring, and this turned out to be the purpose of the plane mission. How much extra intelligence does a guy need, however, who already knew in advance precisely where the Ring operatives were going, where they were storing the “key”, and who exactly these people were to such a degree that he could threaten them as leverage; THAT is insane.

    So, I’ve shown tentatively that so far the 2 missions that Shaw has sent Chuck on (Airplane Key and the Mask) are both absurd if we take him to be legitimately who he says he is.

    God Bless,

    The Man, Stefano The Big Baby Face

    • The intelligence part of this show almost never makes any sense, I’m surprised that you find out this now.

      That’s why the show would never have good ratings and will be in the bubble at best. The rabid fan-base learned to ignore the intelligence plot holes (and so did I to a certain extent, still annoyed here and there), but that’s the main reason why they would never add up significantly more viewers from what they have now.

      Sad

  40. The problem I have is that the producers and writers want to get from point A to point B in a plot, regardless of anything they’ve already established. So a character can do the opposite of what has been established to be a part of said character in order to move the plot from that point A to point B. That, in my opinion, is the core weakness in the writing. Case in point, we’ve already had Chuck declare his love for Sarah, but wait, a bumpy road and another pretty face… Huh?

  41. Bryce_Walker_Bartowski

    Just do what you writers gotta do to leave us in suspense, and then hook our two lovers back up already!

  42. Lou, you nailed it. This is exactly how I see that episode.

    I do have some minor disagreements over some of the humour elements in this episode. I believe the humour could have been much better if they had put Jeffster in their spyvan. Perhaps this is one episode where budget cuts really had an effect. I also didn’t find the Ellie/Morgan moments as funny as I expected to.

    It took me watching it twice (I’m really not a masochist) before I found more of the good stuff in this episode. I think that last 10 minutes really blocked my memory of what transpired in the previous 50 minutes.

  43. Ellie and Morgan were hysterical. I love these two together. Everything they did in this ep- from the secret knock to the epiphany conversation- was perfect. I actually enjoyed their subplot more than the main story.

    I missed Jeff and Lester too, but I’m not sure they would have fit into this episode. If there had been an in-between episode between 3.06 and 3.07 then maybe we could have seen J&L screwing up their spy mission. I think they like spying on girls more than guys anyway. 🙂

    I get why people are mad, but I’m of the opinion that we should all wait and see where this goes. Each show is like a chapter in a book. Stopping to yell at the author about chapter 7 could be wasted words if the problem is already going to be addressed in chapters 8 and 9. Still, all the emotions just go to prove that we do love Chuck! If we didn’t then we wouldn’t all be in a tizzy!!

  44. some excellent pts for both sides…I’m on the Chuck has rolled off the cliff side and here’s why:

    The author makes a great pt, story tellers need creative license–the ability to stretch truths, to imply, manipulate timelines etc…However, when creative license is all you have—you have nothing. This show got by the first year not because of great writing but because of great promise in the idea and because the characters were allowed to develop and grow. Well, if that is true then how can the writing not be the reason? The acting. The cast made the show. From Vik to Zach the players owned their characters and made them sympathetic and meaningful.

    In season two the writers repeated season 1. From the Sarah/Chuck dynamic to outside love interests, temp. love interests, bringing back the dead and incarcerated…season 2 was a “re-imagining” of season 1. But worse…it was nothing new. We have seen this in show after show since the dawn of television. The premise of the series is great. The execution of that premise has been hot and cold. For every great episode their is a head scratcher. That this is the first episode that drew widespread criticism isn’t surprising because for all the plot holes, for all the hyperbolic schtick, for all the repetition– the characters made us care and the last episode left a lot of us not caring.

    The beginning of season 3 saw more of the same. Epis 1-3 were good, Angel de la Muerta might be my favorite episode of the series. Starting with episode 4 the writers took the train off the tracks. They did it deliberately but they did it at the expense of the audience. And here is the main point:

    The production crew started with a good idea and they evolved the idea enough to get people interested and stay interested. Then they got into the area of “tried and true” plot device (formulaic film-making). What they failed to do was expand their goals. They were satisfied with x scenes at the BuyMore, x scenes in the field, x scenes developing relationships. In other words episodes started, climaxed and closed in the same general way: BuyMore, Briefing, Action, BuyMore, resolution, relationship. Especially for hour long dramas this is a weak system because long term interest is generated by “hmm, I can’t wait to see what happens next.” It works in a crime drama because you have the crime, investigation, resolution and people expect that. For a “spy” novel with shadowy Ring agencies you have to have backstory. You have to know something of the antagonist while still having the protagonist reinforce their position. We are always asked to assume that Fulcrum is bad, the Ring is bad, the CIA and NSA are good. Well, in reality the CIA and NSA’s records aren’t outstanding when it comes to honesty and results. But ok, they’re the good guys, Casey and Sarah, despite earlier orders to lock Chuck away or kill him…are good guys. What we never are told is what the evil entity’s motivations are. Are they hell bent on world domination? Are they revolutionaries? Are they counter-revolutionaries takin it to da man? We don’t know. Just told they are bad. Beckman knew all, ruled all…but then one day a 30 yr old field agent shows up and has the power to over-ride the head of the NSA? C’mon, you can pull my leg but don’t try to break it.

    When the intro’d the 2.0 they opened the door for Chuck to be a real spy. That was the mistake. Kill the charming innocence of the Nerd/spy or have him become like Casey. Since they had him burn the asset and not mention it again in the next episode I guess they are opting for the latter. Old Chuck woulda had nightmares and a long chat with Sarah about the act of betrayal.

    If that is the case then they’ve killed the show. The drama and the action scenes (save a couple early ones) are subpar for hr long dramas. The writers don’t build or release tension properly. Yvonne says it in an interview “I think they want to go more for the sci fi/ action angle”. I guess she was right. She also said that that would be a shame because she thought the strength was the mix of action/comedy. She was right. Smart girl. The brains should have consulted her before scripting the season.

    Zach is a decent actor who was born to play the bumbling nerd. He is not a dramatic lead who can suddenly go Bond and be believable. Yvonne plays the conflicted assassin w/ a heart great…she is not doing good as the conflicted heart who is no longer an assassin. Together they play their scenes magically…that is the cause of the uproar from the relationship fanatics. But the heart of the show isn’t the leads, isn’t the drama…it is the comedy and the empathy for the leads. We want Casey-isms and Jeffster and Morgan and the Awesomes and we want to empathize with Sarah and Chuck’s unrequited love. We want Chuck to be the bumbling nerd/bumbling spy who just manages to get by as a spy but as both retains his dignity and morality. But there is no way that the writers can reconcile all of those things. Something has to go and fans are gonna pay twice…having to watch a beloved show turn to crap and then have their show canceled due to production and creative malfeasance.

    • I agree with many of your points and want to re-touch on a good one you noticed. The lead actors on this series, most specifically Yvonne Strahovski, have done such an overwhelmingly fantastic job at pretending to be in love that they painted their writers into a corner.
      Anyone who has seen Sarah with those watery eyes, the lip curls, the looks to the sky while she composes herself knows that there is only one fella for her.With Yvonne knocking every Charah moment out of the ballpark on a weekly basis, I do not know how they could (even if turns out be pretend) roll her into another man’s arms within 5 minutes and NOT to expect this kind of fan reaction.

  45. Very articulate Lou! I think you nailed the story problem…
    Anyone else remember the old – “Things are not always as they appear”- mantra?
    I still think it was way too suspicious that Hannah shows up in a seat
    next to Chuck on the plane – for a mission which was booked by Shaw…
    Sarah has always held her cards close…I don’t think she trusts Shaw at all. Interesting Spy vs Spy tatics. Hannah seems too desperate. Chuck seems to gullable. Shaw…. just not enough personality…he’s up to something.
    I really miss those long dialogue sequences where the characters interact on a personal level. Is it my imagination – or has Sarah said more than 5 words in a row yet this season? Too bad the Olympics have caused a long break…

  46. I think you did a great job!

    Just a couple of points, by the amount of replies it is pretty obvious how devoted the show’s fan base is. I love the show and have watched since the pilot and have the dvds and have tried to drag folks to watch it – including guildmates on World of Warcraft.

    I want a season 4, 5, 6, and onward. I think this could grow like Cheers did. But when I watched the Mask I knew there was going to be screaming. To have Chuck and Sarah go off to find romance in the arms of others hit right into the core of the story. Yes we understand the writers plan to get them back together, but I kept asking myself why? Both Chuck and Sarah are now acting like their relationship was just a Crush and now its over. So how do the writers turn that around in a couple of episodes to where they are in love – that requires amazing writing, more suspension of belief, and risks folks just not caring anymore if it is rushed or handled badly.

    I’ll be there watching. I just hope the “Shippers” which are so devoted to the show and who have expressed the most outrage will still support the show. I hope they do!

  47. I’m not sure why everyone is so eager to accuse the writers of incompetence.

    If this was a show about teachers or doctors, I would agree whole heartedly with Lou’s analysis, but this is a show about SPIES. These people lie for a LIVING (even more so than actors ;)) When we see someone from Team Bartowski acting out of character, I think it behooves us to ask why, rather than to assume the writers don’t know what they’re doing.

    The average writer from a Creative Writing 101 class could see that Sarah’s interest in Shaw was too sudden if they were playing it straight. I KNOW Chuck’s writers are more skilled than this. Sarah’s turnaround was so sudden and complete that I can only assume she has ulterior motives for changing her tune.

    • i really hope you are right and its one of the reasons why i’m eagerly awaiting new episodes, there just has to be a reason for this sudden change in sarah’s character and if i’m pleasantly surprised i’ll be one of the first people to admit i judged the writers prematurely. other than that i’m still looking forward to seeing more from ellie,devon, morgan and especially jeffster

  48. Great article! I think you explained exactly what many Chuck fans were thinking!

  49. Wonderful Article, Agree 100%

    The problem wasn’t what the writers did, it was HOW they did it in that it was inconsistent with not only the previous episodes but even the first part of the same show.

    If I like the first 3 books of a series and then when I start reading the 4th it is totally different, it breaks all the momentuem the first 3 built up.

    Love the show, just hope they get back to the superior writing we have come to expect.

  50. As ever, a thoughtful, well considered piece Lou. However I would contend that in this instance it was not just the HOW but the WHAT that was at fault this week.

    You are absolutely spot on about the suspension of disbelief that is required and the compact that is made by the creators and the audience. One way that the creators on Chuck have managed as you state, is the main relationship between the leads of the show. The reason for this is because we have all had relationships and so can relate to this aspect of the show the quickest and easiest. We can relate to some of the other elements of the show (Buy More – who hasn’t had a job that they hated?) but the spy antics, missions, Intersect are pure fantasy.

    Now the show runners have created somewhat of a monster. The chemistry between the leads as pointed out many times is amazing. We can relate to this – it resonates with us. But just as it can resonate with us in a good way it can also resonate in a bad way. Because of our own internal experiences with relationships (as varied as they may be between partners / people) we know when something does not feel right – we sense it straight away. This leaves the show creators with a major dilemma. They have the opinion for various reasons that if the leads of the show are portrayed to be in a happy loving relationship, it will kill the show. Whether this is right or not is open to debate. Therefore they are always having to put the main leads in a position of getting closer and then breaking up, whether through own choice or external influences.

    These feel wrong – because they have stopped having any resemblance to our own experiences of relationships. When the main relatable part of what is a fantasy show becomes unbelievable then there is an issue in investment and suspension of disbelief.

    The last ten minute of the Mask felt completely wrong for me based upon my own experiences and the characterisation of the leads as built up over the previous 40 odd episodes. Consequently the plot holes that occur in Chuck weren’t so hidden and came to the fore – our disbelief was not suspended.

    Finally I would like to say that I still enjoy this show very much and will continue to watch. But for me, Chuck is now a ‘good’ show, not a great one.